Pursuit of Eternal

Pursuit of Eternal

by Pinaka_

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  • Traumatising content

This Story is about Dev's pursuit of Eternal. We follow Dev as he passes hurdles, one after another to Grab Immortality and control Time. What If you lose everything, but you still have a chance to reclaim everything back. Dev got the same chance after losing everything and left with nothing. This is Dev's journey from nothing to everything. How will Dev achieve his Goal? Join me and we will all walk through this journey of his struggle to the peak.


[I'm writing for the first time, so there'll be issues with my way of writing, but as I learn I'll also edit the changes which could be done to the chapter. Please don't give up on me and my book. Please read the chapters, and tell me what I can do to make it better. If people don't like the story then what's the point of writing it.] [Sorry for Grammatical mistakes. English is not my main language. There will be some problems with punctuation. I can assure you that there won't be any problems in understanding what I'm trying to say.]

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