Mensal learns of his newfound abilities, bonds with a dragon, and finds a master of magic who was thought to be dead. He makes friends and enemies in the world of magic, and seeks to understand his powers further. Assassins come after him, after his power is exposed. What will he do in this new world that he's discovered?
Cover art: Jamie Wang
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Hey Brian! it's ya boi Amanda here.
I know we haven't talked in a while but I decided to review your book.
Overall it's pretty nice, but I do have some problems.
1. The pacing is kinda bad. It feels like it's going too fast
2. Mensal is acting like he's already a pro even though he just learned about magic. He suddenly has the knowledge about different healing stuff and poisons. Strange . . .
3. Classic OP character. Yeah . . . ye
That's basically it, anyways have fun writing your book I definitely enjoyed it ^^
This story is going through editing :) I am friends with one of the authors so please expect changes sometime, so some details will be changed also some humor and other stuff will be edited (im actually helping edit) if you still have a problem with other stuff please add comments or reviews.