The Shadows Of The Lost

The Shadows Of The Lost

by Khanjan Parikh

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Sam has been lost in her life, after the death of her friend and a fatal mistake, for so long but when she finally stumbles upon the rumored Phantom Foundation. She finds she belongs in a world of superheroes,  spies, and assassins. Into a world, where she realizes the true animosity between humans and prodigies that has existed for a long time.

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O.G. Adekaiy
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A great story so far

Reviewed at: Chapter 10

A well written story with fleshed out characters.  The author particularly excels at creating compellling dialogue which is something I think some may overlook. Some of the best parts in stories, at least for me, are the interactions between characters and it's done well here. Near perfect grammar and overall, a great read!