Battlefield Restart 3: An Adventure Beyond Greatness!

Battlefield Restart 3: An Adventure Beyond Greatness!

by Love4NovelGuy

Alex was a bullied high-school student with high sense of morality and a guy who believed in having a firm heart due to his martial art heritage. One day after being beaten unconscious at school he suddenly wakes up to find himself in a mysterious library, but before he could digest his situation, a woman he had never met before reincarnated him into a world of swords and magic.

Fifteen years after his reincarnation he visits the great kingdom of Lancia to reunite with his comrade and childhood friend. However, things quickly fall out of place as he meets an old enemy who had apparently 'reformed' and became a good person after their last encounter including the crown prince of the kingdom itself.

This is ignoring the Ascenders in the shadows...! What are their goals and how is he related to them?

What is to happen in this tale of Hidden Dragons and ACTUAL Dragons? Guess it's all in Alex's hands...

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Death Is Only The Beginning ago
Break Wallkin- Number 0: The Joker ago
The Journey Had Ended, But Villains Still Exist...! ago
Evil had been Reformed ago
Break Wallkin- Number 8: Justice ago
Ascenders ago
Brandon Volts and The Church (1) ago
Brandon Volts and The Church (2) ago
Brandon Volts and The Church (3) ago
Brandon Volts and The Church (4) ago
First Anomaly ago
Second Anomaly ago
Break Wallkin- Number 0: The Fool ago
Lily Moonshade ago
The Royal Family’s Dinner ago
The Cult’s Ruined Meeting ago
An Encounter ago
The Epic Battle Begins! ago
Alex Stuman ago
Arthur Rainglow ago
To Remember ago
Wallkin Remembrance- Modern Combat ago
Wallkin Remembrance- Jack Solomon ago
Break Wallkin- Wild Card: The Joker ago
Wallkin Remembrance- Adaption ago
Wallkin Remembrance- Ambush! ago
Wallkin Remembrance- Sleep Fighting ago
Wallkin Remembrance- Expositional Battle! (1) ago
Wallkin Remembrance- Expositional Battle! (2) ago
Time To Change Destiny! ago
Wallkin Remembrance- The Warrior ago
Wallkin Reminisce- The Day Two Runaway Kids Came Home ago
No Wallkin- The Words Left Unsaid (1) ago
No Wallkin- The Words Left Unsaid (2) ago
Oneself as a Sword, The World as a Mirror ago
Balancing The New Physique ago
A Warrior Knows No Justice (1) ago
A Warrior Knows No Justice (2) ago
A Warrior Knows No Justice (3) ago
A Warrior Knows No Justice (4) ago
The Demon Lord’s Craze ago
Day 1- Artistic Chaos (1) ago
Day 1- Artistic Chaos (3) ago
Day 1- Artistic Chaos (3) ago
Day 1- Artistic Chaos (4) ago
Day 1- The Quintuplets (1) ago
Wallkin Corner- Samuel’s Adventure (1) ago
Day 1- The Quintuplets (2) ago
Day 1- The Quintuplets (3) ago
Day 1- The Quintuplets (4) ago
Break Wallkin- Number 6: The Lovers ago
Arthur’s Aggressive Rehabilitation Program! ago
Wallkin Corner- Samuel’s Adventure (2) ago
Arthur’s New Battle Personas ago
Day 1- Artistic Chaos (5) ago
The Night Fates Intertwined ago
Samuel Unleashes His Power! ago
Author’s Note: Prequels ago

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Overall

This story is quite experimental.

It plays fast and loose with the 4th wall to the point of spending more paragraphs in the meta-plane, talking about the story rather than actually telling.

A neat idea, but it doesn't make for easy reading and doesn't lend itself well to immersing the reader.

The story is also cognisant of it's tropes and comments and tries to subvert them to some extent.

Regrettably, what it builds upon this... Isn't very compelling either.

The story is very convoluted and doesn't establish the characters well, instead breakign the fourth wall, going on about how it's the classic heroic journey, but actually it isn't because X, X and X.

I give half a point, because I can appreciate an author straying from the status quo, but all in all the style hampers the reading experience to the point that I cannot force myself to continue reading.

Seinex
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Author writes from his point of view. But it's just so tasteless. It isn't done normally for a reason. This right here is why people don't write from 2nd person, it's hard to do and his is an example of it spectacularly failing. Author probably probably it would be quirky to imply that being abusive to his characters is funny and new when in reality it's not done because it's again, hard to do well and honestly not that unique. In essence the author bit off more than they could chew and leaving this muddled mess of garbage.