The Iron Teeth: A Goblin's Tale

I've rarely found a story as good as this bravado author thank for sharing such an amazing story once I started 

I couldn't stop I eagerly await the next update

One of my all time favorites. I love the setting and the characters. I do hope Herad gets more sides to her personality. I don't know if this is just a coincidence but the story reminds me of Dragon's Dogma(DD Dark Arisen). Just a question, but will he evolve into an ogre or another variant later?

I really like this story, the grammar mistakes are almost unnoticeable because you are so focused on reading the story your brain typically just auto-corrects it. I really can't wait to see what trouble Blacknail gets into next!

This story is well written and the characters are thoughtfully built. The main character is a goblin, but I can identify more with this goblin than most characters on this site. He's petty, angry, and cunning. I like it. The author brings the goblin to life with stylish writing and well thought out goblin-isms, if there is such a thing. The grammar is near perfect, with small hiccups throughout, but nothing is nearly bad enough to come close to breaking immersion. The story is one I can see a lot of people having trouble with, just because it doesn't have any immediate gratification like most fictions here do. Personally, I enjoy this sort of story. It slowly builds and shows us the world a piece at a time. The only flaw I can see is that it needs to be more variable in the story telling. Slow pacing is fine, but the pacing is almost too even. A little more action or drama in the slow parts would liven up the story and probably round out the fiction overall. Just my two cents. In conclusion, I'd definitely recommend this to anyone that wants to read an amusing, satisfying and original fantasy.

Although the story moves slowly, It makes up with its amazing detail.

The MC character fits perfectly into a goblin who is trying to survive and 

live normally.

keep up the god work

This story captured my imagination in the most wonderful way, it’s not your normal reincarnation fiction that you find all over this site. It’s a story of a weak goblin with slightly more smarts then the rest of his kin looking for ways to survive, you watch as he grows stronger and smarter and even forming loyalties to the people he cares for. Truly an amazing story that deserves to be made into a proper book. I’ve only found small grammar errors throughout the story which can be easily fixed by someone going through it once or twice, good sir I applaud you for the story your juicy mind has come up with.

This is one of the few stories on this website that is actually unique— no generic power up arc to make the protagonist insta-OP after the first few chapters so he can go build a harem just because. I can tell you put in a lot of effort building the world and magic system, especially the lore surrounding mutants.

The way you describe the world from a Blacknail's point of view is also very refreshing, and really helps to give the readers a sense of how a goblin perceives the world. The way you make use of Blacknail's point of view to give reasoning behind his actions or create comical misunderstandings really makes the world feel organic and real.

 

Keep up the good work!

No system notice, no op main character, no handsome bi-shounen leader that can get his way thru everything...

This my friends is a story that you would read when you open a book. NOW NOW don't be scared! 

I am not gonna share what the story is about. But i will say that it will be a story where you can live thru the eyes of goblin in realistic world of magic..  and what are goblins? dum ? yes! Weak? yes! etc etc in short the main character will not suddenly become death incarnate.

Update: i kinda dropped it a year ago because the author was fucking with the time line... and redconning and didn't give clear instruction on which chapters i should have reread ... the site also didn't have a ToC, short story i was confused as hell.... 

When I read this story I can’t believe it isn’t written by a professionnal author, it’s that good of a story. Just one word to describe it awesome ! I love it !

Now here my supportive review ( because I want to read more )

 

The MC is for once not omnipotent nor does it look like he will become so anytime soon. That said, he isn't even human but a simple Goblin.

That's where the fun starts. The "hero" of our story is a model goblin who presents us with all of his strengths and weaknesses in a colorful, quirky and funny way.

All characters, situations and simply the plot is very well thought-out and believable. So much so that I could hardly name any equal in fitting story line among all stories I read so far. 

It's a very realistic fantasy ;).

So unless you need dragons and fireball-gatlings on every corner this fic will definitely satisfy most readers who like genuine stories!