The Iron Teeth: A Goblin's Tale
A new, darker age is dawning. The greed of kings has ignited a seemingly endless war. As men fight, the monsters of the untamed wilds are devouring the frontier. Villages are abandoned as fields go fallow. Murderous bandits roam the desolation.
None of that matters to a nameless goblin slave. He just wants to eat as much food as he can shove into his mouth when no one is looking, but fate runs a twisted course, so instead he is whisked away to the far off Iron Teeth Mountains. To stay alive, he will have to evolve into something more than a simple goblin, and carve a bloody path through the forests of the North.
However, first he has to get over his crippling fear of trees, and survive in a place where everything considers him to be the perfect size for a quick snack...
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No system notice, no op main character, no handsome bi-shounen leader that can get his way thru everything...
This my friends is a story that you would read when you open a book. NOW NOW don't be scared!
I am not gonna share what the story is about. But i will say that it will be a story where you can live thru the eyes of goblin in realistic world of magic.. and what are goblins? dum ? yes! Weak? yes! etc etc in short the main character will not suddenly become death incarnate.
Update: i kinda dropped it a year ago because the author was fucking with the time line... and redconning and didn't give clear instruction on which chapters i should have reread ... the site also didn't have a ToC, short story i was confused as hell....
This is one of the few stories on this website that is actually unique— no generic power up arc to make the protagonist insta-OP after the first few chapters so he can go build a harem just because. I can tell you put in a lot of effort building the world and magic system, especially the lore surrounding mutants.
The way you describe the world from a Blacknail's point of view is also very refreshing, and really helps to give the readers a sense of how a goblin perceives the world. The way you make use of Blacknail's point of view to give reasoning behind his actions or create comical misunderstandings really makes the world feel organic and real.
Keep up the good work!
This story represents all that stories in royalroad has been missing. An actual plot. The author makes an actual world that entraps readers. If your looking for a satisfying story and not just an overpowered MC's tales of nothing, look here
There's nothing a really dislike about this story. The characters are realistic and interesting, the world seems like it has depth, and the MC isn't given everything on a platter. I'm interested to see where it goes.
the title says it , but I'm gonna try expending here a little. The story is a non typical RRL story , meaning it doesn't include ( for now ? ) any reincarnation or VR setting. I have to admit it goes a little slow ( comparing the length and the story covered , what takes 7 chapters here would usually take 1 or 2 chapters on most other RRL fictions ) but the quality of the story and writing ( this near perfect writing is so enjoyable to read when you're used to RRL *_* ) makes up for it by a large margin. The Main character is atypical but you will still find yourself swept in his rythme.
I'm holding myself away from a real " advanced review " for now because I really feel that the story has much more to give than it has right now , and I don't feel comfortable reviewing something that's obviously still in the starting blocks.
Until then , get my follow and I hope the story gets the hype it should
This is my review of The Iron Teeth and I won’t not be subjective. Since it is how I feel about this story, I will of course be subjective.
Story: A lucid, simple story told with great care and planning. The simple life of a goblin comes alive in this writing along with his little wishes, aspirations and dreams. The story has a hidden edge, a captivating tale. I am taking half a star off, though. This is because the story…leaves you wanting after a while. You urge for that big thing to happen, which doesn’t and if it does…not as big as you expected.
Style: Flowing, and fitting for a goblin. But unfitting for Third Person. I wish the author would spice up the vocabulary a bit more, or experiment with pace. The story is extremely good, no doubt but at times, it crawls. I am taking a star off for that. Sometimes it feels like the writer is holding out on us, possibly to stretch the story. However, there is something about this style that draws you in and entraps into the wonderful world of the Iron Teeth.
Grammar: Flawless. You can feel the writer is extremely well versed in contemporary writing conventions and styles. Actually, I would recommend this story as study material for any new author. I won’t be taking off any stars off this section. I doff my hat at the author for the amount of work that must go in to make this error free.
Characters: Very well done. The characters seem life-like, and genuine. Almost all of the times, they remain true to their characters. However, sometimes…just sometimes, they feel a little undercooked. At times, I felt some of their behavior was forced, but it could be the reason for their particular hasn’t been revealed yet. Nothing but near perfect score for this.
In closing, I would urge others to read this and if they don’t, lock them in a room so they do. Even if I am not always agreeing with this style, but it is very enjoyable, to say the least.
Now this, ladies and gents, is a story. And what a story it is. It may be a slowish start. But that slow start gives you a strong sense of the characters in this grand tale. You'll be doing yourself a disservice by not reading this. It feels realistic, and the grammar is a step above most other novels.
Now here my supportive review ( because I want to read more )
The MC is for once not omnipotent nor does it look like he will become so anytime soon. That said, he isn't even human but a simple Goblin.
That's where the fun starts. The "hero" of our story is a model goblin who presents us with all of his strengths and weaknesses in a colorful, quirky and funny way.
All characters, situations and simply the plot is very well thought-out and believable. So much so that I could hardly name any equal in fitting story line among all stories I read so far.
It's a very realistic fantasy ;).
So unless you need dragons and fireball-gatlings on every corner this fic will definitely satisfy most readers who like genuine stories!
This story is a beautiful work that easily captures the essence of a full blown world.
The story includes fascinating detail of world building revealed to the reader as our Main Character a Goblin named Blacknail develops through the story.
Unlike many other stories where creatures people and events seem like simple plot elements the author has managed to portray The main characters adventure under the bandit Cheif Herald.
Creatures all fit into the world as wild animals in a dnagerous wilderness rather than a plot element of kill this as they are evil.
Bandits are displayed as a result of a long drawn out conflict that is continuously fleshed out through dialogue.
While small details these interactions of characters and slow incremental revelations of the world as our MC discovers the world himself and his tribe.
Any fan of true fantasy seeking a whole and complete world with a unique and true system believable creature and people all seamlessly coming togetehr to form a full story, well this is for you don't miss this series!