Days start early in the life for the common man. All day he reaps crop, splits stone and saws wood. He looks forward to the harvest festival where he can drink and watch the woman dance. If he works hard he can carve out a good living for himself and his loved ones. He helps his community and it repays him in kind.

He does not bother himself with the squabbles of the noble lords. He does not pray to keep him safe from thieves or bandits. What keeps him up at night is the horizon that houses powers and monsters which could take in an instant everything what he worked so hard for to obtain.


Thollor Realm is a fictional world where I explore the interaction of ordinairy people with fantastical creatures or magic. I have a few different stories I am writing, some short some ongoing. Whatever is done will be uploaded. I have a Wiki on which I put extra information about the stories: Thollor Realm wiki

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