The Dyson Sphere Dungeon

by TheAkashicRecords

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  • Gore
  • Traumatising content

When She Died She thought That Was It. She Was Wrong


This is my first time writing a story so expect grammer and spelling mistakes, Consteractive critisim is Liked, any hostile comments will be deleted with out a second thought,i am open to sugestions but will not guarentee they will be added.

I do not own the image so if whoever owns it wants me to take it down i will do it as soon as i recive the message.

I also do not own the folowing franchises ( I will ad more as they appear in my novel): Pokemon,

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