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"Close your eyes, so that the next time you see the sun, you WAKE UP DEAD."
'The Suiciders' is a group of murderers specialized to murder various famous figures and set the crime scene in the form of suicide. It closes all the windows for the police to point it out as a murder. As a result, most of the such cases remain unresolved. But, their existence is not a mere folklore anymore. Kartik Khandelwal, a twenty-five year old promising detective at Delhi Police HQ, finds out about the group and starts leading 'The Suiciders Defence Squad' to put an end to the murders and save the day. But, the organization is now on a rogue to complete their sinister decade-long plan. Entangled by fate, read how a group of former college-men have to twist their ways of lives and ideologies upside-down just for the sake of their friends, families, and the country.
Web-novel series written by Zei Zackary, All Rights Reserved. Cover photo taken from Unsplash.
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I have read a total of 15 chapters of the story and still don't know what the hell is happening.
In these 15 chapters, I have not seen any of the tags which are listed, and the characters lack the feel but it could have been better if you had shown their personalities and their problems and their daily life struggles and why they are the way they are or introduced them better.
The conversation between the characters is as emotionless and boring as themselves instead of focusing on the main plot you should focus on the characters and their dialogue. If you could try to add some good jokes which will make the conversation more interesting.
And let the reader connect the dots by themselves. Story writing is an art that uses simple and fewer words and sentences but which fits perfectly in the situation. as you have heard of quality is always better than quantity because a good show is always better than a thousand shit shows.
But at the end my final review is your story is boring and I am not reading anymore.