A Field of Flour

A Field of Flour

by ChimkenNuggey

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Dante, the son of a humble wheat farmer, one day takes a portion of his father's harvest down to Mr. Obi, the village baker. But when he enters, what he finds changes his life.

Through unfortunate circumstances, his soul joins with an angel and for the rest of his life he is attached to it. Traumatized, the boy must deal with the results of what happened that day. Along with the judgemental gaze of all who resent the angels and their wielders.

Through it all, he is left with only one purpose.; to find his victimizer and make him pay.

Along the way he makes some questionable company. A few other kids, traveling the remaining civilizations, separated from their family for their own reasons. As a group, they travel about the remains of their post-post-apocalyptic world, scamming and stealing their way by.

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