Drezo Regalia

by snowangel12

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Martial Arts Supernatural Virtual Reality
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Yami Hikari company had created a new game gear called the Embyro that are split into two different gears: the first is the deep dive gear called ‘Sense' and the second is high tech glasses called ‘Alive.' One is made to transport the players mind to a virtual world, while the other is the next generation new technology that incorporates the reality with the game. A game where it test the limits of technology and human boundaries. What is real? What is fake? Who is right or wrong? What is the Seed? Is life just a game? Three different people's destinies are intertwined: One is on a mission, One wants change in life, and One wants to be left alone. Their story converges in a Virtual Reality MMO game called Growth. This is a story of Zero, Agnis, and BlackStar. Welcome to the Beginning of the End is a Beginning. Let the Song of Infinity ring again.

 

(My name is Jane. The original creator of Drezo Regalia, Howling, Black Moon, Mind Linker, and Valkyrie's Lament. This story is my first ever story written and it might not be the best. I am just reposting the story in Royal Road. The story can also be found on http://enlightendragons.com where the original home of the Drezo Regalia series reside. To get a faster release check out https://www.patreon.com/snowangel. Your help will be greatly appreciated.)

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Volume 1: Prologue + Chapter 1 ago
Chapter 2 The plight of a newbie ago
Chapter 3 ago
Chapter 4 ago
Chapter 5 ago
Chapter 6 ago
Chapter 7 ago
Chapter 8 ago
Chapter 9 ago
Volume 1 Epilogue ago
Volume 1 Extra Chapter: BlackStar's Revenge ago
Volume 2 Prologue ago
V2 Chapter 1 ago
V2 Chapter 2 ago
V2 Chapter 3 ago
V2 Chapter 4 ago
V2 Chapter 5 ago
V2 Chapter 6 ago
V2 Chapter 7 ago
V2 Chapter 8 ago
V2 Chapter 9 ago
V2 Chapter 10 ago
Volume 2 Extra Chapter A group of nutbags ago
Volume 3 Prologue ago
V3 Chapter 1 Strange Beginning ago
V3 Chapter 2 Believe nothing you hear and half of what you see ago
v3 Chapter 3 Moving Shadows ago
v3 Chapter 4 Team Game ago
V3 Chapter 5 Memoir of the past ago
V3 Chapter 6 Scarlet Paint ago
v3 Chapter 7 Fate or Choice ago
v3 Chapter 8 Heaven's Descent ago
V3 chapter 9 A clue of the Broken Past ago
V4 Prologue ago
v4 Chapter 1 Krustallos ago
V4 Ch. 2 The Royal Demands ago
V4 Chapter 3 Fool's Gold ago
V4 Chapter 4 ago
V 4 Chapter 5 ago
V4 Chapter 6 ago
V4 Chapter 7 ago
V4 Chapter 8 ago
V4 Chapter 9 ago
V5 Prologue ago
V5 Chapter 1 ago
V5 Ch. 2 ago
Volume 5 Chapter 3 ago
Special Announcement~~~ ago
V5 Ch. 4 ago
V5 Chapter 5 ago
V5 Ch. 6 ago
V5 chapter7 ago
V5 ch. 8 ago
v5 chapter 9 ago
V6 Prologue ago
V6 ch.1 ago
V6 chapter 2 ago
V6 Chapter 3 ago
V6 Chapter 4 ago
V6 chapter5 ago
V6 Chapter 6 ago

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Hyperion915
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Don't bother reading, needs too much editing

Don't know what the story's like because I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. The sentences are so fragmented and awkwardly strung together that reading becomes a chore, something I wouldn't have thought possible having read things for entertainment my entire life. Don't bother reading unless you don't mind crap writing styles, thearth acting is somewhat high only because I don't know how the actual story goes

scifistorm
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Interesting concepts when you can see parts of whatever story is trying to squeeze its way out of the authors mind. Most scatter-brained story I think I've ever tried to read.

Cruxio
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Are you the Author?Jane Christian?

The story is very confusing. Characters go out of focus and there are little details that are ignored or ommited while some useless details are more focused on. Cant grasp what the main character really wants. Id say this is a good story, but there is just a nagging feeling of disorder when reading this.

gravh10z
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hoo.. it's live again

i already read it long time ago

 

http://www.drezoregalia.com/

asdfghju
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... just checked... and i was wrong. sorry i will delete the other as soon it stops saying error...

 

i like the story, well written, a good turn on the typical VR tale. No major grammar/speling mistake(and i haven't noticed if there are minor ones :P)… only if the author used any different way for the game messages (tables, bold, italics, different color font…) it would be better

FEARLESS
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It is good. I`v read it for some time, it`s a little different then everithing else here, and well written. 

FreakofGray
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I remember helping out with the first few chapters in editing... man it's been so long since then. Time sure does fly... It was a pretty cool story Hey Jane remember that time about that exploding car and how someone pointed out cars don't explode? Or that time I pointed out how you left out that death mechanic and I made a long comment about it? Good times... Anyhow Janes a pretty good writer so give here story a read! It was pretty well done if I do say so myself! I wish you luck in continuing your epic tale! Cheers.

G4merSylver
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Read before ye roast me…

This ain't an original work, far from it. I am not sure how the LN was called but there was an professional work of this… Hell even even the Smiley was taken from there… The two-part gear. Like about everything. Its a scam that you call it an original story.

Now go ahead an roast me! *Teleports away*