SPACE COLONIST in the oceanic world ARK
by NirvanaPenguin
- Sexual Content
#Synopsis:
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In the far future the planet earth is full, and thanks to 3 key technologies, genetic manipulation, cryosleep, and advanced space engines, humanity builds deep space spaceships and launch themselves to the unknown confines of space to forge a new future away from home.
Follow our young engineer Erik as he starts on his first job at the young age of 60 years old in future earth where humans will live hundreds of years, he will reach an unknown place with his spaceship by accident and to survive he will have no choice but to explore alien structures and hunt dangerous monsters to get stronger, making alliances with the locals in more than friendly terms sometimes.
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The protagonist is a young 60 years old "young" engineer, he's easy-going and a good guy, he's been trained so he will know what he's doing most of the time, in "Chapter 1 - A New Beginning" he will explain more, as a human from the future where bodies are just flesh containers, he's fairly openminded (kinda like "Altered Carbon" from Netflix, but different, you can go one day to a genetic center, pay, and get inside a liquid tank and then, the next time you open your eyes your body has already changed, then you get your ticket and go home just like that, but combat modifications would be regulated).
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Hi, NirvanaPenguin here, suggestions on the story are welcome, this is a book I'm gonna write for fun and to get better at writing in preparation for a story I will start next year.
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A quick heads-up about the tags:
tags: lewd, alien, mystery, technology, AI, DesignedIntelligence, Waterworld, ARK, cooking, hunting, gathering, KingdomBuilding, alliances, leviathan, genetics, FromWeakToStrong, AlienReproduction, Futanari, HappySex, genetics, teaching, mechanics, FuturisticTechnologies, weakToStrong, cautiousProtagonist.
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Dialog Settings:
'...' --> mental dialog
"..." --> out loud dialog
[...] --> voice inside his head
but it will be clear during the book, the story might be slow for some, but i didn't wanna do a "10 years later" kinda crap and then strong to go explore, but he will slowly get there.
The book cover was drawn by myself(not the background though), I will try to make or pay someone to make a cooler one in the future though.
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Spoiler?:
Inspiration for the octopeople.
- Asari from Mass Effect.
- sea horses.
- subnautica all beings reproduce that way.
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An interesting premise but unpolished
Reviewed at: Chapter 7 - Creating Trust
I only had time to get to chapter 7 today so YMMV
While grammar It's not realy a dealbreaker for me, looking up how to format stories, such as propper use of capitalisation, dialogue and paragraphs might be helpfull.
This has an interesting premise after all.
Now, I didn't make it very far today, only to chaper 7 so far the only red flag is the harem tag. If this turns into "excuse to rut with a harem of specific fetish demihumas" It would be a shame.
The images are a nice touch, I mean if light novels can do it why can't this story.
Additional tip: Posting everything at once if you have a backlog is slightly counterproductive for at least this site. Scheduled posting gets more exposure.
Plus, adjusting formatting or grammar of one chapter a day based on feedback is less of a chore then doing everything. IE good for learining and lessens fatigue.
4 stars so far, beeing slightly generous with ignoring the grammar and formatting stuff.
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I plan to update more below this point as I get further in.
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Decent but not great(updates frequently)
Reviewed at: Chapter 67 - A Warm Future (+18)
So this story feels like the author is in a rush to tell it. Not as if they want to end it already but as in they're so excited that they miss important things. The concepts are solid even if they are so heavily inspired that it almost warrants a fanfic tag. Which isn't bad, in fact the premises for this novel and for Tamer are some of my favorite. However the execution is somewhat lacking. Character depth for everyone is extremely shallow and this tanks the story the hardest. The mc is little more than a prop for reader insert with how bland he is and how murcurial his character is. The surrounding characters have almost no personality beyond a set of urges and a veneer of personality that just goes along with the mc. In regards to style well there really is no style the story is so basic and lacking in any serious depth that style suffers for it. There is definitely a habit of tell instead of show with this author but it is so slight that I really do not mind it.
Biggest Cons are: The characters are as flat as Mario was in the 90s and the overall plot comes too easily for the MC.
Biggest Pros are: The 18+ scenes are good and hit the exact niche the author tries to.
Tldr: it's decent as a fetish story but quickly feels hollow as anything else. Still worth reading.