The Soul Saga

by Epicocity

Meredith Childs dreamed of being the best Guardian one could be, protecting the world from all that would harm it. Working her days at her parents’ garage, she never took her eyes off that distant horizon.

However, the one thing she lacked was the one thing that made all the great Guardians: the ability to use magic.

Yet when Flame Commander Royston Masters arrives in her small town and takes an interest her, Meredith is put on a path of adventure with her best friend Eddie, leading her straight to the Guardian Corps and its trials along the way.

She’s not alone, either; not with a floating boy, an obnoxious girl her age, magical climate zones and a Beastmaster whose bark and bite are both unknown.

Not to mention a shadowy threat lurking just beneath the surface, inexorably tied to their dying world and the myths of its past.

With her journey just beginning, and many souls on the line, Meredith will have to strive forward and fight for her dream, magic or not…

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Book 1, Chapter 1: The Mechanic ago
Book 1, Chapter 2: The Decision ago
Book 1, Chapter 3: The Departure ago
Book 1, Chapter 4: The Frostland ago
Book 1, Chapter 5: The Trial ago
Book 1, Chapter 6: The Beast ago
Book 1, Chapter 7: The Plan ago
Book 1, Chapter 8: The Desert ago
Book 1, Chapter 9: The Renegades ago
Book 1, Chapter 10: The Lesson ago
Book 1, Chapter 11: The Puzzle ago
Book 1, Chapter 12: The Chase ago
Book 1, Chapter 13: The Ruins ago
Book 1, Chapter 14: The Warning ago
Book 1, Chapter 15: The Metropolis ago
Book 1, Chapter 16: The Assault ago
Book 1, Chapter 17: The Titan ago
Book 1, Chapter 18: The Choice ago
Book 2, Chapter 1: The Arrival ago
Book 2, Chapter 2: The Academy ago
Book 2, Chapter 3: The Test ago
Book 2, Chapter 4: The Practice ago
Book 2, Chapter 5: The Souls ago
Book 2, Chapter 6: The Class ago
Book 2, Chapter 7: The Omen ago
Book 2, Chapter 8: The Dream ago
Book 2, Chapter 9: The Reaper ago
Book 2, Chapter 10: The Reunion ago
Book 2, Chapter 11: The Mirror ago
Book 2, Chapter 12: The Gash ago
Book 2, Chapter 13: The Gathering ago
Book 2, Chapter 14: The Settlement ago
Book 2, Chapter 15: The Beastmaster ago
Book 2, Chapter 16: The Forge ago
Book 2, Chapter 17: The Devourer ago
Book 2, Chapter 18: The Earth-Splitter ago
Book 2, Chapter 19: The Lightbringer ago
Book 2, Chapter 20: The Understanding ago
Book 3, Chapter 1: The Tournament ago
Book 3, Chapter 2: The Commander ago
Book 3, Chapter 3: The Prisoners ago
Book 3, Chapter 4: The Girl ago
Book 3, Chapter 5: The Teams ago
Book 3, Chapter 6: The Clash ago
Book 3, Chapter 7: The Showdown ago
Book 3, Chapter 8: The Parents ago
Book 3, Chapter 9: The Island ago
Book 3, Chapter 10: The Leader ago
Book 3, Chapter 11: The Legacy ago
Book 3, Chapter 12: The Battle ago
Book 3, Chapter 13: The Friends ago
Book 3, Chapter 14: The Breakout ago
Book 3, Chapter 15: The Motivation ago
Book 3, Chapter 16: The Interference ago
Book 3, Chapter 17: The Victory ago
Book 3, Chapter 18: The Coup ago
Book 3, Chapter 19: The Maze ago
Book 3, Chapter 20: The Finals ago
Book 3, Chapter 21: The Message ago
Book 3, Chapter 22: The Brother ago
Book 3, Chapter 23: The Resurgence ago
Book 3, Chapter 24: The Corps ago
Book 3, Chapter 25: The Guardian ago
Book 3, Chapter 26: The Celebration ago
Book 4, Chapter 1: The Facility ago
Book 4, Chapter 2: The Prison ago
Book 4, Chapter 3: The Mission ago
Book 4, Chapter 4: The Map ago
Book 4, Chapter 5: The Staff ago
Book 4, Chapter 6: The Flight ago
Book 4, Chapter 7: The Doubt ago
Book 4, Chapter 8: The Winter ago
Book 4, Chapter 9: The Interrogation ago
Book 4, Chapter 10: The Following ago
Book 4, Chapter 11: The Signal ago
Book 4, Chapter 12: The History ago
Book 4, Chapter 13: The Broadcast ago
Book 4, Chapter 14: The Panic ago
Book 4, Chapter 15: The Castle ago
Book 4, Chapter 16: The Traitor ago
Book 4, Chapter 17: The Invasion ago
Book 4, Chapter 18: The Truth ago

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A bit mediocre in my opinion but I look forward to improvement! Solid start but it really just couldn't keep my interest and started feeling like it was dragging on a bit without much reason putting it nicely.

The last thing I would want to do is offend, but it's quite a dreadful read in my honest opinion.