Lemur Goes to Forash

by Dylan Craine

[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]

Rakkel arrives in Forash City with nothing but the contents of xir messenger bag and a desire to see the legendary Forash Marketplace.

The only catch is that xir body was long ago converted to that of an anthropomorphic lemur.

This sort of thing is commonplace where xe comes from. In Forash, not so much. Will the people of Forash accept xir among them? Will anyone even buy the trinkets xe brought along to sell? And in a city full of stock humans, what sort of attention might xe attract from the handful of fellow body-modders who already live there?

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