Core conjurer

by bruite

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

Born an outcast to an ancient family of mages, Michael finally gains what he always yearned for but not in the way he expected.

After loosing my last story to a fight with some stairs i decided to give writing one last go.

[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]

Picture is Messier 51 (The Whirlpool Galaxy) from the hubble heritage team.

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