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(I can't find a button that will tag this review as including some spoilers, so beware of spoilers!)
I've been looking for a werewolf story with a unique twist for some time now. This might be it, but there's a lot of work that needs to be done. So, to begin with the critique.
The story begins with an action scene and it's immediate the author doesn't have much experience writing action scenes because it lacks excitement. It does, however, create some intrigue, so I'll give it that. One tip I'd like to offer is to do some research into the concept of 'showing' rather than 'telling'.
Staying on the subject of 'telling', the majority of the first chapter is info-dump after info-dump. In fact, we are told the backstory of almost every major character introduced. Not much really happens in chapter 1, besides all the world-building, which I feel was a missed opportunity. Some sort of prologue in which we see one of their backstories first hand might have been a better choice. Another option could have been extending the action sequence (which only spans a paragraph or two) into something much more tense, that takes up the majority of the chapter, would certainly have hooked me in more effectively.
Onto the topic of grammar. This is where I think the author struggled the most. Paragraph structure in general needs a lot of work: some paragraphs are far too long and contain several different topics, and dialogue isn't separated at all which further adds to paragraph length. On occasion, the narrator switches between third-person limited to third-person omniscient, which can be quite confusing. In one instance, present tense was used instead of past tense, pulling me out of the story for a short moment. All-in-all, I get the impression that the author hasn't been writing very long, so hasn't had the time to perfect their grammar.
However, I do give a higher score to the characters. It's easy to see that the author is passionate about their story and has fun writing it. And to me, that's all that matters. I also had fun reading the first couple chapters. If you can see past the errors, there is a decent story in there. I really hope the author doesn't take offense at my review and instead sees it as constructive criticism, showing areas in which they can improve to truly help their story flourish. I know that when I was a teenager, I probably wouldn't have had the courage to post my work online, and I know that even now my work isn't perfect and can recieve its own fair share of critisicm.
So, to conclude, there are some unique plot points and hints at further intrigue. If you like reading werewolf stories and can forgive an author who hasn't quite perfected their craft yet, but is still growing, you should definitely give this story a try.