Seventh Seal
by Nestor1079
- Gore
- Profanity
A band of mercenaries, trying to change the world, adventure by adventure. They'll take any job, be it bandits, monsters, demons or dragons.
This is a spinoff/ sequel to Katarina the Witch Hunter. It takes place roughly 300~ years after Katarina's story. While it's not completely necessary to read Katarina first, it will fill in a lot of background information.
[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]
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Realistic personalities
Reviewed at: Chapter 7: Ankar-Set 1
I can outright say that there is not one person in the entire story without flaw. Everybody in it deserves a kicking in the behind, and few would refute that point.
That is a good thing btw. Each character has actual depth to them, with most having some semblance of a backstory. It's not often they are forced on the personality, and it all goes very well together.
The style of the story is pretty decent. Bit of an info dump at the start of every chapter, but that's no problem at all. Even the history is engaging and interesting.
Grammar is fine. Found two whole mistakes in the first five chapters.
Overall, I give this story 4.5 out of 5. I don't understand the other ratings, honestly.
Very good
Reviewed at: Chapter 42: Heart of a Lion 7
When making a story, any story I find it very important that you must have your characters having flaws. Royal road, there are many stories where the main character or side characters are very surface level and rarely have any issues. Most of the time they do things that don't make sense in the set up world. Yet, this story does this very well. Like the past reviewer this story I found to be pretty interesting because of the way they handle there flawed out cast and I honestly can't wait for more to come.