Summer Girl

Summer Girl

by brittmack

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Esperanza and Joan haven't seen each other in a decade, but Joan's (now going by Jo) is back for the summer. A chance meeting at their tiny town's grocery store sends Esperanza into a frenzy. Who is this beautiful, mysterious, obviously gay girl? Why is she here? And how long is she staying? And what would Esperanza have to do to get a hot lesbian summer romance?

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A shame there isn't more.

Reviewed at: Chapter 1

I loved it. It was well written, had believable characters, it made me want to read more.

You really get the feeling of a run-down small town, that slight depression, the feeling that nothing is happening or going to happen to improve the town.

The hook was there, the chance meeting and vague memory.

Now all it needs is more words (and a middle and an end, the things I always struggle with!)

I hope you keep writing.