One Piece: Blood Unleashed

by Morpheus146

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After a life full of wars and betrayals, where conflicts of different ideologies and ways of life dictate the flow of time, in an era full of blood and chaos where one couldn't even comprehend the reasons for their death, precisely in this era, an extraordinary individual finds himself cornered whose existence aroused the people's curiosity and imagination from the distant past, all over to future.

We will follow Vlad the Impaler, this legendary figurehead of the chaotic century that was the 15th into his new journey and new life in this unpredictable world. 

A world where one could get powers by eating fruits? A world where people have superpowers?
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"Hades, where have you sent me!? Do I look like a person who enjoys getting tortured and made fun of? No, I just want a peaceful life without conflict and wars. I've shed enough blood for one life."

That's what he said to the skies, but it would remain to be seen how the future of this champion will fare while standing side by side with monsters. 

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Summary of the synopsis:

- You have Vlad the Impaler (Vlad Dracula) not the vampire, but the actual historical guy (your standard 15th-century warlord). He's sent in this fantasy world with a bad start (actually crappy one)

- By how long this synopsis is, I can tell you in advance my story is slow-paced.

-My MC from the start will not be dreaming about pirating or other bullshit since he dislikes those things.
-Again this will be a slow-paced story with a crazy amount of original take on the story, simply put I built an original story upon a fanfic world series where my MC isn't a SI.

(If you're bored of the guy that self inserted his MC into the original story or the others who are doing almost the same stuff, be sure to place this story in your library and check it out once I write more volumes.

P.S: THIS STORY IS NOT THE COMMON ONE PIECE FANFIC THAT FOLLOWS THE SAME THEMES OF THE ORIGINAL STORY.

     - ALSO THIS STORY IS SLIGHTLY SLOW-PACED, SO ANY COMMENT AND REVIEW TARGETTING THIS ASPECT WOULD BE SARCASTICALLY JABBED AT.


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KidBuu
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I keep going back and forth of whether I like this story or not. I like the idea of the story much better than the narration, thoughts, and talking scenes more than anything.

Spoilers ahead but nothing major.

The positives:
Writing: For the most part the writing and sentence structure in  the story is good. There is an occasional mistake but nothing major.

Plot : This is where the story really shines. First off you have the idea of Vlad the Impaler being a reincarnated mc in the world of One Piece which I believe is a great choice.  Now the author goes for more of a historical Vlad than the myth one but even then I wouldn't say completely historically accurate. The mc isn't as mad as the real man would be if the accounts of his stay in Hungarian Prisons is true(Impalling rats for entertainment). However, in my opinion a combination of reality/myth would have been better such as Dracula Untold(Vampire in One Piece). I also like the idea of the mc not going in the standard direction of pirate/marine. It is something different from the majority of One Piece fan fict.

Backstory/prologue: Some readers have complained about how long this is but I enjoyed it. It paints a picture of the man that is going to be reincarnated. It shows us what he IS LIKE. This is important because it goes with my biggest negative and the reason why its missing a star and a half.

Negative:

The negative I have with this story is one in which I see in many stories with a reincarnated MC, at least when the MC was formally important/intelligent. I don't know how many stories I read in which the Mc is a reincarnated Master mage, wizard, general, king etc etc and for some reason once he is reincarnated his intelligence and maturity just drops. What I would advise the author to do is to read Vlad's dialogue that you wrote in the Prologue and compare it to how he thinks, speaks, and acts in the World of One Piece. At one moment he is a proud king/warlord who was being worthy of great respect and fear. The next his insults/mannerism is to continueally refer to a man as "fatty" and to bite his hand. It doesn't fit. You have him breaking his pre-established character and then Vlad goes back and forth between acting like a dumb kid and him old self.

Anyway best of luck,

-Buu

 

 

Priesta
Overall

Boiiii....that ship sure got some mad power or somekind of space warping ability that it got that far without me realising it. The author really want the MC to have a love interest that it went from 20 to 100 in the span of few chapters. Up until chapter 72, interactions between MC and love interest consist of normal conversations and occasional banter. From chapter 73 to 87, the MC don't even interact or having eye contact with said love interest in those few chapters. BUT suddenly starting from chapter 88, the MC start to call the love interest as "love" and even gave her a kiss on the lips, got no reaction whatsoever from the love interest part; no surprises nor anger, just act normally eventhough they don't even flirt up to that point. Not gonna judge others' grammar as I'm not a native speaker myself. Am dropping this, sadly. Got angry dm from the author but am still keeping this review up. Readers are entitled to their opinion(s) , don't ever forget that. 

So That is Death
Overall

Good story, good character, the story is advancing slowly but that is the charm of this story.

Vlad is actually a "strong" character who is bit by bit creating his team and accumulate power.

 

Only problem??? Why the intro is so long to read?? 5 chapters it's to much.

 

Why not 5 stars ? because only god is perfect Kappa