Aberrant Tales

by Terrenheim

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  • Traumatising content

The world of deities had met its end. Now is the time of nightmares and delusion. Or it should be that way but Alvah made the best of living a half-life until after so long he spoke with another "creature". A broken mage and a lovely monster meet in a world deprived of its gods and other stories both long and short.

With cover art provided by Jack0fheart as found in https://www.royalroad.com/profile/178717

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A very beautiful short story

Reviewed at: Desdomena

This is a well written short story with a ton of heart. I felt that there were hints of desert dwellers' mythos wrapped into a clear and enthralling tale. The first page was more saiting by itself but would be more than happy if the story continues.

Only noticed a single spelling/grammar mistake but that could be because the story completely pulled me in.

Throughly recommend.