"Wh..who are you?"
Arched brows rise as my barely-there voice scratches through my throat.
"Is that really what you're wanting to know?"
It takes a few moments, but my head eventually shakes, my real question slowly slipping out under my breath.
"What's happened to me?"
His smile reveals sharp teeth. Arms that had been folded behind him come forward to clasp in front of him as he nods. The nails tipping his fingers are long and sharp looking.
"The end of your life is just now beginning."
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Good premise. Very well written. Hard to say much in this review without spoiling anything. Gah! It's a wake up in the fantasy woods and freak out short story.
As an aside, the synopsis is like the very last lines of the story. That seems like a bit spoiler-y.
And now I'm stuck with that 50 words requirements for reviews.