VINES: A Short Story

VINES: A Short Story

by Writ

VINES: A Short Story is a little tale about a witch and her dealings with the aggrivations that plague her. Product of a writing challenge. Audiobook included! 

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Asviloka
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This is a complete story in a narrative musical style. And accompanied by a complete audio narration! And, of course, vines. Vines vines, all the vines. Vines to grow and vines to go. Vines to ease the falling snow. Vines to rhyme and vines in time. Vines vines vines.

Needless to say, this means it is perfect and cannot be criticised. Let there be vines!

DragonOfRochester
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This short story is delightful. The humor is spot on. The audio version provided by the author is beautiful... Both versions ;) But most importantly, there are VINES. And the vines must grow.

I suggest giving this short story a chance. And especially the audio version which is absolutely worth it.

ArcaneSaga
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An easy to read and comfortable story! I think the ending was a bit too grim, perhaps, but narrativly speaking it was superb.

I enjoyed the singing hum and the simple description. An easy going tale for children and adult alike. And a very cute touch with the cat as a character.