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In a world ruled by the Demon King, an angel descends to share his message of love and peaceful living. Just one problem: The people here aren’t exactly loving or peaceful. In fact, they chant “murder” and “theft” like it’s their national anthem.

More so, the angel shoots arrows while they have guns. He wants to save them, but they're beyond corrupt. 

"Son of a motherless goat! What the fudge did I get myself into?"

Is there any hope for salvation? Only time will tell. But, when the chips are down and the demons are coming, no power is better than Love and Anti-Peace!

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