The Omniversal Language

by pkemoner

Seth is just a regular baseball coach for a well off high school. He loves his niece and is maybe a little addicted to video games. Then, he wakes up to an ancient sentient system from before the Big Bang cussing him out and telling him to strip. After all, how can he fight aliens without some training in the omniversal language of battle?

Placeholder cover and description. Cover image is not mine. I will replace it as soon as I can find someone to draw one for me or draw one myself.

This is my first ever attempt at really writing something and posting it to Royal Road. I appreciate any reviews, help, or criticism. I hope to write a generally light hearted story, but there will be some dark/sad parts. Romance also won't play a major part but will be included. Maybe.Thank you for reading! 

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