Original HIATUS Mystery

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Not_an_alien
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At chapter 4, I can feel the anticipation of wanting to see our autistic god and robo mom interact with the sentient life on 'Earth but not really'. At first I thought it would be like a diary of the last human sorta thing, but now its an isekai and I'm hyped as balls.

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Good start. Will wait for other chapters. I am curious what will happen next. I hoping to see what is the other had to offer to mc. Just please dont make it into some harem bullshit. MC acts like 100 years old person would and not some impulsive hormonial moron.