Walker Of The Worlds

by GrandVoidDaoist

Lin Mu was a common boy living in a small town, ostracized by the townsmen because of a mistake he made during the harvest, his house seized to compensate for it. Forced to fend for himself in the outskirts, he finds a rusty ring embedded in the tree where he always used to play as a child.

Witness his story as the mysterious rusty ring changes his destiny forever, opening him up to a world he would never have experienced, people he would have never met, and powers he would have never had.

P.S. This book will be published till chapter 59 after which the rest will exclusively be on Webnovel.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Lin Mu ago
Awakening ago
The Mysterious Ring ago
Spatial Disturbance ago
Success And Failure ago
Understanding The Mysteries Of The Ring ago
Onward To The Town ago
Conflict ago
Resolution ago
Conclusion ago
Selling The Pelts And The Horn ago
Returning To The Shack ago
Training ago
Making A Small Fortune ago
Chase ago
Shopping ago
First Sword ago
Four Vessels Restoration Pill ago
Danger And Harvest ago
A New Martial Technique ago
Hunting And Training ago
First Battle ago
Shocking The Merchants ago
A Large Transaction ago
Finding An Inn ago
First Kill ago
Progress In The Martial Technique ago
Rescue ago
Making An Acquaintance ago
The Astonished Sky Precepts Sect ago
A Unique Beast ago
Spirit Stones ago
Mutant Beast ago
Booking A Room And Buying More Weapons ago
8th Stage Of The Body Tempering Realm ago
Consuming The Spirit Fruit ago
A Shocking Series Of Events ago
Testing The New Skills ago
First Cultivation Session ago
Discovery ago
Success With The Second Skill ago
Full Potential Of The Boulder Collapsing Fist ago
Injury ago
Black Crack ago
Gaze Of The Golden Eyes ago
The Void Weaver Spider ago
Upheaval ago
Returning From The Grand Void ago
Gaining A Teacher ago
Refining The Spirit Sense ago
Sudden Enlightenment ago
The Day Of The Fallen ago
The Garden Of Karma ago
Teachings About The Void ago
Legacy Of The Lost Immortal ago
Returning To The Northwind Inn ago
A Small Conflict ago
Xukong's First Test ago
Getting A Weapons Manual ago

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Shoelessme
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Royalroad is not a Qidan Advertiser

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Intersting start. I personally find the inevitable 'everybody shits on the MC' start to be exceedingly trying.  That said I apreciate if they keep it to a single chapter or two.  This story seems to have finished that up in the first chapter.  So nice on them for that.  It seems to be decently written if a bit steriotypical with the abuse the MC bit.

But...

"P.S. This book will be published till chapter 59 after which the rest will exclusively be on Webnovel."
The above is a good reason to stop now.  I personally really like this site.  I don't see it as just an advertiser for Qidan... If you are not going to put your whole work up here then please don't bother.

A very classy way many authors who want to sell their works do it is to write the full story here,  then take down sections as they publish a book. I frequently purchase those books to encourage the authors. I think people absolutly have the right (and should be encouraged) to make money off their literary genius.  But there is a good way and a very bad way to do it. This is not the good way.

On the other hand.  Good on your for telling everyone up front what you had planned.  I gave you an extra star for that.

BurningSaiyan
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It's very good so far. Lin Mu really feels like a kid and acts appropriately. The other characters also feel realistic. The town magister is really great, typically Xianxias would have him be obscenely corrupt and a caricature more than a person. But this one was thoughtful, strict and fair. Really felt like a real person.

I also really like the pacing, Lin Mu is slowly enjoying his newfound gifts, all the while the plot is steadily unfolding in the background.

 

I'm really looking forward to how this unfolds.