Unyielding, he rises, tearing apart the chains that bind him.
Facing vile horrors and terrible evil, he embarks on a treacherous journey to save his companion's very soul. He meets allies in unlikely places, enemies, aiming for his life and when a whole kingdom lies in the turmoil, he finds a reason to fight.
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I finally got around to reading this story... and even though it started off pretty slow, it's definitely interesting. If you had picked any race but human, I probably would have started reading a long time ago... lol.
Anyway, the style of writing definitely reminds me of LMS, which isn't exactly a bad thing, but there were a lot of times that it became very irritating for me. However, It was still good enough for a 4.5 in that regard.
The story itself was very entertaining and I really like the two main characters.... who are basically the only real characters in the story so far. That's not a bad thing though, since it allows for much more focus on their relationship and personalities.
Honestly, the higher something is on the best rated list, the more critical of it I become... which is probably why I noticed so many reoccurring grammatical errors. You may want to go through with CTRL + F and search for "Incredible" because there were probably about 50 cases where you forgot to add the "LY" to the end,
The other flaw is that VR theme stories had been too abundant recently
Keep up the good work ! I was hooked by chapter one and ended up reading it all in one day !
I don't know why but it dose and I'm very pleased that it dose. Now that I think about it the MC and his will power may have something to do with it.
Thank you very much for making this story. I really like it a lot.
So Awesome story! One of my few favourite!! Must reward you with lots of stars! I want to put 100 stars! xD
I have no idea what makes this special enough to remain in the top 10 even after being inactive for so long.
But i have read it several times, and i am still checking at least twice a week for any updates...
LOVE IT! NEED MORE!