by Ahra Manyu
Rakna wasn’t normal. No, unmistakably not. Whether it was his appearance, his personality, his abilities, his identity, nothing about him was normal. But he was trying to be. He was merely but a tormented soul doing its best to live the life it had been taught to enjoy again.
Would being collected by a glorified system bring something out of him? Would he finally learn to breathe in the pool of blood that suffocated him?
The Harvester does not sow, he only collects. All he has ever known to feel was loss and the only thing he can do now is take. He will devour their hearts and drink their blood if it is what it takes.
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So far I'm liking everything your throwing out there. One point I'd change would be in the fight scene grammar in specific. When reading it feels wrong and kind of choppy. "He does this, then he does that" type of thing I'm not an English major by any means so I can't put any ideas out there to help but it just wrong to me when I was saying it in my head idk if that will help any but good job I read up to the latest chapter no idea why it says chapter 2
If you like alpha male then this is for you.
The grammar is great, the characters have depths in them but I feel like their presence only highlight the awesomeness of the mc, the world building is ok.
I think the concept of the story is similar to most korean novels/webtoons, but that's just my opion.
Nevertheless it was quite good read.