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Things go awry when the forces of chaos recruit a new Dungeon Master. From underpaid pseudo taxi driver to underground murder labyrinth builder, one young ladies' life is getting flip turned upside down!


I guess being a Dungeon is better than doing rideshare for a living?

-The MC


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uavgas
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Early review on a good story

Reviewed at: Crisis Aversion, Chp 9

I like that the MC seems to actually think critically about her choices. Her reactions and thoughts on the things that are happening to her feel realistic. It is easy enough to imagine the different characters that are being introduced, and the author is not throwing new ones at the reader left and right. It's easy to follow. 

There are no grammar issues that need mentioning, everything is pretty much on point. The one thing I don't like is that it feels like the chapters are too short. I appreciate getting any chapters at all, but I can't help but want more content for each release. 

I never read the original version of the story, but I am enjoying this one so far. I plan on continuing to read it for as long as chapters come out for the foreseeable future. 

leoidicel
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as of right now 13 the latest chapter and i have to say that it has a good hook especially if you're into dungeon core stories.

the few characters we met so far are good, the worldbuilding is steady and the plot somewhat funny,the story is still fresh but il sit by and watch it develop .

i recommend reading this.