The Pyramid of Prosperity

by Bonemage

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The Magi use their power, and knowledge, to rule over many worlds.

To those born with the ability to hold mana within themselves, the sky is the limit. 

Stavi was not so lucky, he will have to create his own path to prosperity.

*A story of a young man who will do anything to achieve power, even as far as inventing the first magical MLM*

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