After being caught stealing, a boy finds himself transported to a fantastic world on the brink of a new era: The Age of Thievery!

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I really like the story so far. The premise of the story is intriguing, and there have been some interestimg twosta and turns in the plot so far. The writing style is refreshingly down to earth and there is a good amount of quirkiness. All in all it is a really strong start.