The Corrupted Archer System

by Sly Lyon

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A boy named Anre wants to become an Archer and trains hard in order to do so. One day he stumbles upon a strange object which gives him a system. However! There's something profoundly wrong with the system!

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It's not a bad story, but it is not good either. It brings little to the table that wasn't done before or executed better somewhere else.

If you want to read it, then I'd suggest you don't come with high expectations.

3.5/5 Readable but it's too early to say if it'll be any thing more than that.