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A broken planet leaks a rare form of energy from its core. 

While millions die from its effects,  those who survive develop strange new abilities. 

The Uanarin, a Council made up of the seven great races of the Universe, sense the coveted energy and converge on the planet to claim it for themselves. Though there are rules they must obide by. 

They must give the planets inhabitants a chance to show they are worthy to claim the energy for themselves. 

Lyewax Vix a survivor and mankind's greatest hope, leads his newly formed team against the first wave of monstrous, unreasoning creatures intent on annihilating all life they find. 

But just as dangerous, is the insidious threat he must face hidden amongst his own people. 

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I had to read the first chapter twice because the MC died and was revived for some reason. This story seems to the 4 book in an 8 book series. That is how much knowledge of this story the author expects you to know. This is one of those stories where the more you read the more lost you are. This should story should have had like 10- 30 chapters of prolouge before we get to where the author decided to start it.