Iruka takes Mizuki's shuriken to the back in place of Naruto. Thinking Iruka to be dead, Naruto loses control and prepares to unleash the Kyuubi, however before he can tear off the seal, he is stopped by the hand of his hero. The Yondaime Hokage...

My first ever fic, begun over a decade ago when I was but a fresh-faced babe struggling to find enough money to pay for food at Uni. Over ten years, 175k words, nearly 2 million views on ff and 1k reviews later, it's a handful of chapters away from being finished. Thought I'd post in on here as well, for anybody who might enjoy it.

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Dylan King

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It's Naruto...but with 1.5x more seriousness.

Reviewed at: The Chunin Exams I

This is amazing. Pure and simple.

The author is respectful of the source material and nails each character while also doing their best to patch up some of the plot holes along the way by adding to each character.

If your looking for a more "serious" Naruto world then give this a shot, it is all that without sacrificing the lighter themes in order to make the setting more fun without being too realistically horrific.

Please keep this going...IDK what this is to you Cathal Ashenhand...if it's just a writting exercise or something fun to do in your spare time...but you have something special here.