Elsewhere

by kohr

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

The story follows a boy who hates his name. After the suicide of a close friend and peer role model, he's on the brink of the same fate. But he doesn't follow her. Not even as his resolve to keep going is tested time and time again once he's sent into the worlds of magic and monsters he once longed for. 

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Elsewhere has been an interesting concept so far- I've rather enjoyed seeing the two main character's talk and explore each other's cultures. Of course, I can't make any definite statements as I'm only on chapter seven. But if things keep going at the rate there going now then I think this'll be a great novel!