Reborn: Choose Your Hero

by DragonBerryZ

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After being transported to another world through a video game, Seol died three months later along with his friends. After his death, he thought everything was over, but somehow he ended up being reborn as a Slime monster along with a powerful "Evolve" skill given by the system.

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Very fresh and new, interesting.

Reviewed at: Chapter 16: Moba Hero Class

Evolve, summoner, Overpowered Dragon MC with special class that you don't see often in any stories. Not gonna reveal what class is it as I don't want to spoil it for new readers. Also, very fresh and new, I thought it's going to be cliche story, but turn out I was wrong as it's totally something new.

MC was a coward and timid in the beginning, but that's normal considering how much he was bullied. However, I'm glad he learned what he has to do after given a second chance. Definitely grown more mature.

I also like that he can now summon monsters to battle, which is pretty cool. So far pretty good not much to say.

Author is very responsive, I like that he always replies to his readers instead of ignoring.

Grammar, well pretty good and easy to understand. There's some error, but only a little. Overall still understandable and readable.

If you like gaming stories with overpowered MC and revenge, monsters, God and a lot of adventure, I say this story has it. There some grinding, but even the grinding and levelling seems enjoyable.

Other than that, not much to say for now except hoping for faster release.