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Voldemort stirs, and the Triwizard Tournament awaits. Harry Potter has spent his short time in the wizarding world facing danger unprepared, and a step behind the truth. Now, he must make a choice. Continue to let others create his path, or stand tall before the forces that array themselves before him - no matter the consequences.

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Cathal Ashenhand

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Harry deciding to counterattack

Reviewed at: The Missing Girl

Even if we all know the "lore" of Harry Potter, the Author by simply changing the decision of two characters changed the finish line of Harry fourth year at Hogwarts.

I found his characters way more alive, with Harry evolution from pretty much "frightened" fourteen years old boy uncared by his only family, that does not put effort at school; to a more proud persona, that takes his lesson seriously as he understands that someone out dare cares for his wellbeing and upbringing, that Sirius loves him.