The Slime Dungeon Chronicles (prequel)

by falcon167

Original HIATUS Adventure Comedy Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Magic Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Reincarnation Strong Lead Summoned Hero Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

Thank-you to everyone who has followed this story since the beginning. This is the draft edition of the story for sale on amazon. Certain missing plot elements and mistakes are likely missing from this version. 

This series is the prequel series to the larger slime dungeon universe that continues in The Slime Dungeon Novellas, The Slime Dungeon Diaries, and The Reluctent Healer.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Birth (short) ago
First Growth ago
Being a dungeon ago
Forming a dungeon ago
The first expedition ago
Final results ago
Back at the ranch ago
Dynamic relations ago
Mixed Relations ago
First Crossroad ago
Unexpected regrets ago
Chapter 11- Developments ago
Change ago
Living through the dungeon experience ago
No Chap, need help. Chap later today ago
Claire's secret ago
News and Revelations ago
New company ago
New Company Part 2 ago
Bloody Good Time ago
Lesson of Loot ago
The Stones Start to Roll ago
Last Improvements ago
The last of them ago
Finale (Part 1) ago
Finale (Part 2) ago
Epilogue ago
Book 1 changes not on RRl ago
Prologue- The Price of Victory ago
Chapter 1- Decision (*) ago
Chapter 2- Plans (*) ago
Chapter 3- A New World (*) ago
Chapter 4- The mines (*) ago
Chapter 5- Elf thoughts (*) ago
Chapter 5.1- Being human (*) ago
Chapter 6- Arrival (*) ago
Chapter 7- An In-depth View (Part 1) ago
Chapter 7- An In-depth View (part 2) ago
Chapter 7- An In-depth View (part 3) ago
Chapter 8- Lesson ago
It's up- the book is published ago
The new slime chart- I'm still here ago
Chapter 9- The church + (finished updating all the chapters) ago
Chapter 10- A Dungeon's thoughts ago
Chapter 11- The First Church Meeting ago
Chapter 12- Lost and confused ago
Chapter 13- Evolution ago
Chapter 14- Elvin Delights (Part 1) ago
Chapter 14- Elvin Delights (Part 2) ago
Chapter 15- Ending the Night with a Bang ago
Chapter 16- Emergency Quest; Save the Town! (Part 1) ago
Chapter 16- Emergency Quest; Save the Town! (Part 2) ago
Chapter 17- Plan the Counter Attack ago
Chapter 18- Negotiation? ago
Chapter 19- The Plan ago
Chapter 19.5- The Last Bond (Side story) ago
Chapter 20- Scout ago
Chapter 21- Begin The Assault! ago
Chapter 22- Punishment ago
Chapter 23- Doors of the heart (Part 1) ago
Chapter 23- Doors of the Heart (Part 2) ago
Chapter 24- Sentinel (Part 1) ago
Battle Music thread ago
Chapter 24- Sentinel (Part 2) ago
Chapter 25- Miracle ago
Epilogue ago
Q&A IS LIVE ago
The changes made to Book 2 ago
Prologue- Welcome to the Dungeon ago
Chapter 1 *- It's still a problem ago
Chapter 2 (part 1)- Final Test ago
Chapter 2 (Part 2)- The Final Test ago
Chapter 3 (Part 1)- Testing One's Metal ago
Chapter 3 (Part 2)- Testing Ones Metal ago
Chapter 3 (Part 3)- Testing One's Metal ago
Chapter 4 (Part 1)- Drowned, Smashed, Shocked, or Burned ago
Chapter 4 (Part 2)- Drowned, Smashed, Shocked, or Burned ago
Chapter 5* - The Knifed Zombie ago
Chapter 6- Pantheon of Darkness ago
Chapter 7 (Part 1)- Past is Future ago
Chapter 7 (Part 2)- Past is Future ago
Chapter 7 (Part 3)- Past is Future ago
Chapter 8 (Part 1)- Tooth, Claw, and Dagger ago
Chapter 8 (Part 2)- Tooth, Claw, and Dagger ago
Chapter 9 ago
Chapter 10- Doc's Return ago
Chapter 11- We are You ago
Chapter 12 - Time for an Upgrade ago
Chapter 13- A Dungeon Environment ago
Chapter 14- Dungeon Punishment ago
The January Update: smooth sailing ago
Chapter 15- A Royal Rescue ago
Chapter 16 (Part 1)- A boy and a prince walk through a gate ago
Chapter 16 (Part 2)- A boy and prince walk through a gate ago
Chapter 17- Tidings ago
Chapter 18- Magic ago
Chapter 19- Potential ago
Chapter 20 ago
Side story- Gretony/ Life of a slime ago
Chapter 21- Learning, Teaching, Obeying ago
Chapter 22- Resolve ago
Chapter 23- Ambush ago
Chapter 24- Consequences of Hate ago
Chapter 25- Failed Perception ago
Epilogue ago
Prologue ** ago
Chapter 1 * ago
Chapter 2 ** ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 3 - ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 4 - ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 5 - ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 6 ** ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 7 - ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 8 ** ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 9 ******* ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 10 **** ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 11 ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 12 ***(new end) ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 13 ****(ending) ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 14 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 15 ***** (before and after meeting) ago
Quick Update- fixing last 4-5 chapters and RRL future ago
Vol 4. Chapter 16 (new) ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 17 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 18 ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 19 ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 20 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 21 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 22 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 23 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 24 (new) ago
Vol 4. Chapter 25 (new) ago
Vol 4. Chapter 26 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 27 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 28 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 29 ago
Chapter 30 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 31 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 32 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 33 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 34 ago
Vol 4. Epilogue ago
Author's Afterwards ago
Commercial for Book 4 ago
Book 4 up on amazon ago
The Future of Slime Dungeon ago
Links to new Slime ago
Finals, Game Super Update + Face reveal + Devlog ago
Lich boss fight slime video game :) ago
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FakeBot
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Truly a heartwarming story about a young dungeon finding his way through the world. It's adorable how he learns the horrors of humanity and that everything is merely food! :D

The worst part of this webnovel is how there are quite a few spelling and grammar errors. I would recommend having a proofreader or editor look at them first to fix the obvious stuff or scan through once yourself before posting. The way it is written is easily understandable and the grammar errors don't undermine the meanings.

 

As for the story currently the only concerns I have are how the demon made his power grow exponentially and how he is the only slime dungeon. I'm pretty sure that Falcon understands the pitfall of rapid power growth being a cheap, unsustainable form of entertainment but our favorite little dungeon is still growing pretty quickly... Content such as happenings in the dungeon or adventures or how the evolutions of slimes actually behave seem much more fulfilling to me. As for being the only slime dungeon-- this doesn't make sense at all. It's a starter option and surely one pixie or another has had the idea to choose slimes even if just for the novelty of it or to experiment with the unknown.

Most of the characters are either one or two dimensional, but the focus of the story is on Doc and the biosphere of the dungeon so it's better to have only Doc and his pixie be the ones with character development. Too many complicated characters would take away from the atmosphere.

The main point is that it's exciting watching our favorite little dungeon crystal growing up and trying to survive in this world filled with turmoil and this story is a pleasure to read!~

I wish you well with your health problems, now off to read Galataea Crystallim, Hero of Naught and Mystery of the Dungeon like you recommended~

Tel
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A good Dungeon to crawl

Stumbled on this Dungeon while waiting for a couple of other stories to chip themselves free of their writers blocks.  Book one has a few rough spots that can be largely chalked up to early write as you go efforts. Book two, book three the plot firms up a good deal in a way few Dungeon stories ever manage.

 

More than a bit of Crafter/Game Master to the theme but the MC doesn't run full tilt to over powered. The over all balance of the story is decent as not everything is explained, nor is everything whisked away by a magic solution. Style yeah mostly enjoyable but one point keeps getting hammered showing adventurers it's a "good dungeon" and isn't going to go blight the landscape.  It keeps getting brought up but it's insipid exposition. The factions could be a little more pronounced and the whole thing handled by a couple dungeon runs, an MC balance tweaking discussion, and after dungeon reports with the faction bosses comparing notes.  Grammar..........never thought I would say this but even if you don't go for typed gutturals only the mom has a bit of purple formatted flavor to her text. A bit of formatting can go a long way to making people stand out as individuals.

 

Good or bad the brothers are the best characters out of all three books. They shine. Elementally perfect bouncing in out and around the story in a way that just works better than everyone else. I laughed, clapped, cheered, laughed harder. Calling them MMO gamers on a speed run may be off the mark but also a fairly accurate description.

 

P.S. The teleport glyph......Not sure if I can call  it genius but it's a great mechanic to skip a lot of repetitive elements after their first run. A lot of Dungeon stories are either dungeons with a much simpler design or a meat grinder without something like a teleport.

P.P.S. looking forward to book four.

wayfarer
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He doesn't know what slimes are, yet know about honey and gold; doesn't know horses, yet bows and swords are ok; immediately identifies Claire as a fairy...how even? There isn't any sort of consistency in this character building whatsoever, not to mention the characters are really boring, albeit cute, with illogical responses and actions worse than a common Japanese light novel's meek main character.

Catlord
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I mean that quite literally anything else besides 5 stars for royalroad, is pure nonsense.

swordthane
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I hope this story goes on for a while as it is a fun read. The Protagonist is not too strong but not helpless either which is something that is hard to do well. 

Eriand
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Your story is part of why I come and check RR every couple of hours. The Slime Dungeon is one of my favorite stories on this site. Please keep up the good work.

Kaminarion
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PunchManParty
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I've read other dungeon stories and oh my blob this is a better read. I loved how the author is pacing the story so far and thank you my dear good sir for not making the MC overpowered too fast. The characters' involvement with each other is great, not focusing on just one for too long and giving everyone what their current role in the story is.

 

Grammar is great and not an eyesore, character development is good, and I don't know if this is what they'd call a biased review for giving you straight 5 stars.

superdbgtfan
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A great read with author constantly improving

A great story Author has gone back and updated the chapters to add more depth to the story. some spelling and grammar errors but gets fixed after comments. shows promise and author keeps improving.

saganatsu
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1: Overall, good, at that I couldn’t stop reading level.

The plot keeps it interesting, a good balance between the dungeon and the town 

 

weaknesses:

prose can get a bit  overwrought.

characterization can get a bit clumsy

you need to go back an rewrite the epilogue of the first book, even for people not buying the amazon version: it doesn't link up with the second book at all.