The Slime Dungeon Chronicles (prequel)

by falcon167

Original HIATUS Adventure Comedy Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Magic Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation Strong Lead Supernatural
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Thank-you to everyone who has followed this story since the beginning. This is the draft edition of the story for sale on amazon. Certain missing plot elements and mistakes are likely missing from this version. 

This series is the prequel series to the larger slime dungeon universe that continues in The Slime Dungeon Novellas, The Slime Dungeon Diaries, and The Reluctent Healer.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Birth (short) ago
First Growth ago
Being a dungeon ago
Forming a dungeon ago
The first expedition ago
Final results ago
Back at the ranch ago
Dynamic relations ago
Mixed Relations ago
First Crossroad ago
Unexpected regrets ago
Chapter 11- Developments ago
Change ago
Living through the dungeon experience ago
No Chap, need help. Chap later today ago
Claire's secret ago
News and Revelations ago
New company ago
New Company Part 2 ago
Bloody Good Time ago
Lesson of Loot ago
The Stones Start to Roll ago
Last Improvements ago
The last of them ago
Finale (Part 1) ago
Finale (Part 2) ago
Epilogue ago
Book 1 changes not on RRl ago
Prologue- The Price of Victory ago
Chapter 1- Decision (*) ago
Chapter 2- Plans (*) ago
Chapter 3- A New World (*) ago
Chapter 4- The mines (*) ago
Chapter 5- Elf thoughts (*) ago
Chapter 5.1- Being human (*) ago
Chapter 6- Arrival (*) ago
Chapter 7- An In-depth View (Part 1) ago
Chapter 7- An In-depth View (part 2) ago
Chapter 7- An In-depth View (part 3) ago
Chapter 8- Lesson ago
It's up- the book is published ago
The new slime chart- I'm still here ago
Chapter 9- The church + (finished updating all the chapters) ago
Chapter 10- A Dungeon's thoughts ago
Chapter 11- The First Church Meeting ago
Chapter 12- Lost and confused ago
Chapter 13- Evolution ago
Chapter 14- Elvin Delights (Part 1) ago
Chapter 14- Elvin Delights (Part 2) ago
Chapter 15- Ending the Night with a Bang ago
Chapter 16- Emergency Quest; Save the Town! (Part 1) ago
Chapter 16- Emergency Quest; Save the Town! (Part 2) ago
Chapter 17- Plan the Counter Attack ago
Chapter 18- Negotiation? ago
Chapter 19- The Plan ago
Chapter 19.5- The Last Bond (Side story) ago
Chapter 20- Scout ago
Chapter 21- Begin The Assault! ago
Chapter 22- Punishment ago
Chapter 23- Doors of the heart (Part 1) ago
Chapter 23- Doors of the Heart (Part 2) ago
Chapter 24- Sentinel (Part 1) ago
Battle Music thread ago
Chapter 24- Sentinel (Part 2) ago
Chapter 25- Miracle ago
Epilogue ago
Q&A IS LIVE ago
The changes made to Book 2 ago
Prologue- Welcome to the Dungeon ago
Chapter 1 *- It's still a problem ago
Chapter 2 (part 1)- Final Test ago
Chapter 2 (Part 2)- The Final Test ago
Chapter 3 (Part 1)- Testing One's Metal ago
Chapter 3 (Part 2)- Testing Ones Metal ago
Chapter 3 (Part 3)- Testing One's Metal ago
Chapter 4 (Part 1)- Drowned, Smashed, Shocked, or Burned ago
Chapter 4 (Part 2)- Drowned, Smashed, Shocked, or Burned ago
Chapter 5* - The Knifed Zombie ago
Chapter 6- Pantheon of Darkness ago
Chapter 7 (Part 1)- Past is Future ago
Chapter 7 (Part 2)- Past is Future ago
Chapter 7 (Part 3)- Past is Future ago
Chapter 8 (Part 1)- Tooth, Claw, and Dagger ago
Chapter 8 (Part 2)- Tooth, Claw, and Dagger ago
Chapter 9 ago
Chapter 10- Doc's Return ago
Chapter 11- We are You ago
Chapter 12 - Time for an Upgrade ago
Chapter 13- A Dungeon Environment ago
Chapter 14- Dungeon Punishment ago
The January Update: smooth sailing ago
Chapter 15- A Royal Rescue ago
Chapter 16 (Part 1)- A boy and a prince walk through a gate ago
Chapter 16 (Part 2)- A boy and prince walk through a gate ago
Chapter 17- Tidings ago
Chapter 18- Magic ago
Chapter 19- Potential ago
Chapter 20 ago
Side story- Gretony/ Life of a slime ago
Chapter 21- Learning, Teaching, Obeying ago
Chapter 22- Resolve ago
Chapter 23- Ambush ago
Chapter 24- Consequences of Hate ago
Chapter 25- Failed Perception ago
Epilogue ago
Prologue ** ago
Chapter 1 * ago
Chapter 2 ** ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 3 - ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 4 - ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 5 - ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 6 ** ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 7 - ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 8 ** ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 9 ******* ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 10 **** ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 11 ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 12 ***(new end) ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 13 ****(ending) ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 14 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 15 ***** (before and after meeting) ago
Quick Update- fixing last 4-5 chapters and RRL future ago
Vol 4. Chapter 16 (new) ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 17 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 18 ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 19 ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 20 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 21 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 22 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 23 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 24 (new) ago
Vol 4. Chapter 25 (new) ago
Vol 4. Chapter 26 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 27 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 28 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 29 ago
Chapter 30 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 31 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 32 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 33 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 34 ago
Vol 4. Epilogue ago
Author's Afterwards ago
Commercial for Book 4 ago
Book 4 up on amazon ago
The Future of Slime Dungeon ago
Links to new Slime ago
Finals, Game Super Update + Face reveal + Devlog ago
Lich boss fight slime video game :) ago
Slime:Evo- the video game ago
Kickstarter is live! ago
Book 6 is out ago
The Complete Guide to Slime Dungeon is out ago

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naitsabesatof
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A fun story to read even thogh it changes in composition sometimes.

herbin45
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Ignore the grammar review i gave since i only give 4 stars and 5 stars to what i consider is perfect grammar.

 

Every bit of this fiction is amazing. He has combined a dungeon reincarnation story into a romance comedy with drama and some really tense moments. The characters are all really well written and i love every bit of it.

dxhvv
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This is one of the best thing i have ever read!

First of all i would like to thank you for such a epic work!

 

after going through same old stories of reincarnations this one is simply on a whole new level!

the very concept and its placement is unique,something like this should have given  a felling of confusion but you somehow made it quit simple to understand!

there were some grammar issues here and there but overall nice. Well there is a need for a little character adjustment as the twins personality and the princess!

THE FEARLESS LEADER WAS AN EPIC CHARACTER!

please keep on going on with this story thank you for your hard work!

10tailedfox
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First time I ever hoped a story would update less frequently

Well im just going to dive right into it, this story needs to be planned better. There is a severe lack of forshadowing and characters seem very shallow and inconsistent. Im not going to go in-depth but i'll just say the author needs to think about everything and how it connects within the arc before diving in and  just improvising. I 100% think the author has the capacity to make the top 10 on this site if he'd only take the time to think of a story-line worthy of that divine title. Overall, a fun read with the most addicting concept I've ever seen.

 

TL:DR  (ADHD)

 

-Slow down and think ahead a couple of chapters before you write

TJ Demuyt
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A book with a very fun concept, following the life of a dungeon.

The very first chapters reminded me of DungeonKeeper, later on the story goes into completely original content that is fun to follow. Sometimes the thought process on dungeon creation is a bit winding, but still great fun.

I like that there is a sizeable  cast of characters, a number of subplots and an incremental introduction of new items, monsters, abilities, characters, etc. etc. This is great stuff.

The only drawback for me are the too childish interactions between the Dungeon and the Fairy and the pups. As a father of four, I can tell you that children do not speak like this. That speech pattern vaguely resembles a 2 year old, for 1 month, and then even a 2 year old can pronounce properly. I read a comment that this is because the Dungeon is a newborn, fine, but it is an old soul dungeon, does not make sense to me. The fairy speaking like that makes even less sense, she is definitely older than 2 years. And the pups, eh, I guess... It would still be irritating to read.

crobby777
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Best dungeon story i've ever read

Simply amazing, i love the style for being simple yet also serious and funny accordingly. 

The story is unique and interesting got lits of potential

Well what do you expect nice poetry btw

Love the character, but i would like to have more indeph reason for certain action, like how diana offer her soul. I get the point but a more distinct reason for her fear and comfort ao she could give her soul would be better.

 

Keep it up buddy! And get well soon from the organ removal!

Matthew T. Gilley
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this was great. i bienged this entire series in a vew days. this moved my love of slime stories to a new appreciation of dungeon stories. 

askeron32
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too many bland stereotypes and simple characters

Reviewed at: Chapter 12 - Time for an Upgrade

The characters feel shallow, only stereotypes, no comittment and passion, any deeper thoughts stringing one along, can be felt from any of them. It had some good moments true but they were far and few in between. Some cute or funny tropes sure were in there. There also were some nice ideas for plot and overarching progress but it with the general feel of the characters... No leveling and strength progression that made one wait for the next fix of incremental increase in strength. :/

All in all it gave me a feeling at being annoyed spending my time with it because it was too good to just abandon but making me question myself too often "why i was reading this again"...

Mile
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not dungeon story =.="

Inconsistent n more than half of story not about dungeon,more about the kingdom,empire n the ppl

if u read this story for dungeon elements,pls dont find another one!!!

Patrick Duffy
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Would recommend this to anyone looking to read a dungeon core book was my intro into this type of book and can't get enough of this genre. That being said slime dungeon chronicles is a very fun read I devoured all 4 of the books they didn't last a day once I had them very interesting takes on slimes and their evolutions.