The Slime Dungeon Chronicles (prequel)

by falcon167

Original HIATUS Adventure Comedy Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Magic Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation Strong Lead Supernatural
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Thank-you to everyone who has followed this story since the beginning. This is the draft edition of the story for sale on amazon. Certain missing plot elements and mistakes are likely missing from this version. 

This series is the prequel series to the larger slime dungeon universe that continues in The Slime Dungeon Novellas, The Slime Dungeon Diaries, and The Reluctent Healer.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Birth (short) ago
First Growth ago
Being a dungeon ago
Forming a dungeon ago
The first expedition ago
Final results ago
Back at the ranch ago
Dynamic relations ago
Mixed Relations ago
First Crossroad ago
Unexpected regrets ago
Chapter 11- Developments ago
Change ago
Living through the dungeon experience ago
No Chap, need help. Chap later today ago
Claire's secret ago
News and Revelations ago
New company ago
New Company Part 2 ago
Bloody Good Time ago
Lesson of Loot ago
The Stones Start to Roll ago
Last Improvements ago
The last of them ago
Finale (Part 1) ago
Finale (Part 2) ago
Epilogue ago
Book 1 changes not on RRl ago
Prologue- The Price of Victory ago
Chapter 1- Decision (*) ago
Chapter 2- Plans (*) ago
Chapter 3- A New World (*) ago
Chapter 4- The mines (*) ago
Chapter 5- Elf thoughts (*) ago
Chapter 5.1- Being human (*) ago
Chapter 6- Arrival (*) ago
Chapter 7- An In-depth View (Part 1) ago
Chapter 7- An In-depth View (part 2) ago
Chapter 7- An In-depth View (part 3) ago
Chapter 8- Lesson ago
It's up- the book is published ago
The new slime chart- I'm still here ago
Chapter 9- The church + (finished updating all the chapters) ago
Chapter 10- A Dungeon's thoughts ago
Chapter 11- The First Church Meeting ago
Chapter 12- Lost and confused ago
Chapter 13- Evolution ago
Chapter 14- Elvin Delights (Part 1) ago
Chapter 14- Elvin Delights (Part 2) ago
Chapter 15- Ending the Night with a Bang ago
Chapter 16- Emergency Quest; Save the Town! (Part 1) ago
Chapter 16- Emergency Quest; Save the Town! (Part 2) ago
Chapter 17- Plan the Counter Attack ago
Chapter 18- Negotiation? ago
Chapter 19- The Plan ago
Chapter 19.5- The Last Bond (Side story) ago
Chapter 20- Scout ago
Chapter 21- Begin The Assault! ago
Chapter 22- Punishment ago
Chapter 23- Doors of the heart (Part 1) ago
Chapter 23- Doors of the Heart (Part 2) ago
Chapter 24- Sentinel (Part 1) ago
Battle Music thread ago
Chapter 24- Sentinel (Part 2) ago
Chapter 25- Miracle ago
Epilogue ago
Q&A IS LIVE ago
The changes made to Book 2 ago
Prologue- Welcome to the Dungeon ago
Chapter 1 *- It's still a problem ago
Chapter 2 (part 1)- Final Test ago
Chapter 2 (Part 2)- The Final Test ago
Chapter 3 (Part 1)- Testing One's Metal ago
Chapter 3 (Part 2)- Testing Ones Metal ago
Chapter 3 (Part 3)- Testing One's Metal ago
Chapter 4 (Part 1)- Drowned, Smashed, Shocked, or Burned ago
Chapter 4 (Part 2)- Drowned, Smashed, Shocked, or Burned ago
Chapter 5* - The Knifed Zombie ago
Chapter 6- Pantheon of Darkness ago
Chapter 7 (Part 1)- Past is Future ago
Chapter 7 (Part 2)- Past is Future ago
Chapter 7 (Part 3)- Past is Future ago
Chapter 8 (Part 1)- Tooth, Claw, and Dagger ago
Chapter 8 (Part 2)- Tooth, Claw, and Dagger ago
Chapter 9 ago
Chapter 10- Doc's Return ago
Chapter 11- We are You ago
Chapter 12 - Time for an Upgrade ago
Chapter 13- A Dungeon Environment ago
Chapter 14- Dungeon Punishment ago
The January Update: smooth sailing ago
Chapter 15- A Royal Rescue ago
Chapter 16 (Part 1)- A boy and a prince walk through a gate ago
Chapter 16 (Part 2)- A boy and prince walk through a gate ago
Chapter 17- Tidings ago
Chapter 18- Magic ago
Chapter 19- Potential ago
Chapter 20 ago
Side story- Gretony/ Life of a slime ago
Chapter 21- Learning, Teaching, Obeying ago
Chapter 22- Resolve ago
Chapter 23- Ambush ago
Chapter 24- Consequences of Hate ago
Chapter 25- Failed Perception ago
Epilogue ago
Prologue ** ago
Chapter 1 * ago
Chapter 2 ** ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 3 - ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 4 - ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 5 - ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 6 ** ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 7 - ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 8 ** ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 9 ******* ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 10 **** ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 11 ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 12 ***(new end) ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 13 ****(ending) ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 14 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 15 ***** (before and after meeting) ago
Quick Update- fixing last 4-5 chapters and RRL future ago
Vol 4. Chapter 16 (new) ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 17 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 18 ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 19 ago
Vol. 4 Chapter 20 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 21 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 22 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 23 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 24 (new) ago
Vol 4. Chapter 25 (new) ago
Vol 4. Chapter 26 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 27 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 28 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 29 ago
Chapter 30 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 31 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 32 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 33 ago
Vol 4. Chapter 34 ago
Vol 4. Epilogue ago
Author's Afterwards ago
Commercial for Book 4 ago
Book 4 up on amazon ago
The Future of Slime Dungeon ago
Links to new Slime ago
Finals, Game Super Update + Face reveal + Devlog ago
Lich boss fight slime video game :) ago
Slime:Evo- the video game ago
Kickstarter is live! ago
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superdbgtfan
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A great read with author constantly improving

A great story Author has gone back and updated the chapters to add more depth to the story. some spelling and grammar errors but gets fixed after comments. shows promise and author keeps improving.

saganatsu
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1: Overall, good, at that I couldn’t stop reading level.

The plot keeps it interesting, a good balance between the dungeon and the town 

 

weaknesses:

prose can get a bit  overwrought.

characterization can get a bit clumsy

you need to go back an rewrite the epilogue of the first book, even for people not buying the amazon version: it doesn't link up with the second book at all.

 

Synesta
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Fun, original and relaxing!

I have to say i m pleasantly surprised by your work and truth to be told i've just read everything in one go and laughed half of the time. Good Work and good job there esteemed author!

 

I've seen some dungeon type writings here on RL and i have to admit you are the best one in my book.

 

Keep the good work, can't wait to read  it!

 

Ps: Can't give you 5 star because nothing can be perfect ( otherwise why would ppl wants to do something better and better ?? :p)

 

Cookiepro
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I love the story and the characters.

And it's super active so I'm not left on a clif hager for to long.

JohnDelvfar
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read the entire thing today. and you left THAT!!!

Thank you for all you efforts. Lot of fun to read.

 

I look forward to what comes next

 

John Delvfar

newyevon2
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read up to chapter 23, posted on 6/11/16.................

shinx13
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Please don't ever proofread this, the way you make sentences' structure is kinda unique on it's own way.

And i love it so much!!

Flamecrow
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great dungeon creation novel. Great plot and amazing character creation. No complaints

Wise old penguin
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I'm just here, because someone rated this fiction half a star

Based on the grammar, story, story, style and characters. I'm going to say that this story definitely doesn't deserve half a star, there's in fact rarely a story on this site that does. Thanks to the MODS (aside from that Donald trump one, but that was b8).

I'm going to give a full rating to try and make up for the *sshole that gave this story half a star.

the madfull god
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you are the slime god of writing

this story is somthing so crazy and new that it just might work which it did the moment i started reading i was pulled into a movie theater in my mind i love how you put so much detail into your storys that it it is like a movie then the way the story progress always keeps me gussing and wanting to know more i litteraly cant stop i need help but any way amazing story never stop