Fates Parallel (A Xianxia/Wuxia Inspired Cultivation Story)

Fates Parallel (A Xianxia/Wuxia Inspired Cultivation Story)

by DarkTechnomancer
Artist: TsurotArtistry

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

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After centuries of endless wars, the three greatest nations of the continent have come together in peace. As a symbol of their cooperation, they have worked together to establish the Grand Academy of Spiritual, Martial, and Arcane Arts, a place where the best and brightest of each nation can gather on neutral ground and share knowledge, techniques, and cultures. Can the peace truly last, or is the academy just another proxy for the constant conflicts the three nations face?

None of that matters to Lee Jia, a homeless young girl who's biggest concern is surviving the winter. But when she accidentally stumbles into the academy in search of a new place to stay, her destiny is changed forever. Determined to carve out a new place for herself and make the most of her good fortune, Lee Jia dives head first into the world of magic and martial arts.


Fates Parallel is my first serious attempt at writing a story, and a personal love letter to Eastern fantasy and xianxia stories. It's heavily inspired by East Asian culture, folklore, and mythology, with what is likely going to be a decidedly Western artistic license. I try to write every day, with a goal of about 45,000 words per month (~1500 per day). Chapter lengths are around 3000 words on average, releasing on Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays.

Cover art drawn by the incredibly talented Tsuu (TsurotArtistry).

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143 Chapters
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Chapter Name Release Date
1. Academy ago
2. Roommate ago
3. Initiation ago
Fates Parallel is now available on Kindle Unlimited! ago
145. Wilderness [Start of Volume 4] ago
146. Calm ago
147. Urayama ago
148. Tennin ago
149. Kami ago
150. Reconciliation ago
151. Envoy ago
152. Reflection ago
153. Dinner ago
154. Growth ago
155. Onmyouji ago
156. Tutor ago
157. Departure ago
158. Slaughter ago
159. Sovereign ago
160. Allies ago
161. Welcome ago
162. Return ago
163. Grace ago
164. Nightmare ago
165. Safety ago
166. Escort ago
167. Visitation ago
168. Divinity ago
169. Yangye ago
170. Guests ago
171. Home ago
172. Surgery ago
173. Disciple ago
174. Clandestine ago
175. Hideout ago
176. Agreement ago
177. Raid ago
178. Catharsis ago
179. Fallout ago
180. Love ago
181. Mortality ago
182. Magic ago
183. Vessel ago
184. Impossible ago
185. Research ago
186. Strength ago
187. Farewell ago
188. Epiphany ago
189. Favor ago
190. Soulscape ago
191. Adoption ago
Interlude ??? - Someone Covers a Lot of Ground ago
192. Innovation ago
193. Metamorphosis ago
194. Gravity ago
195. Worries ago
196. Reunion ago
197. Absolution ago
198. Restitution ago
199. Housewarming ago
200. Simulacrum ago
201. Summons ago
202. Audience ago
203. Petition ago
204. Interrogation ago
205. Nostalgia ago
206. Sneak ago
207. Trouble ago
208. Ice ago
209. Honesty ago
210. Emissary ago
211. Pressure ago
212. Urgency ago
213. Reminiscence ago
214. Portent ago
215. Revelation ago
216. Pact ago
217. Trial ago
218. Witness ago
219. Uprising ago
220. Hostage ago
221. Collapse ago
222. Reincarnation ago
223. Capture ago
224. Iseul ago
225. Map ago
226. Diplomacy ago
227. Stall ago
228. Overpowered ago
229. Essence ago
230. Alliance ago
231. Invitation ago
232. Bargain ago
233. Goodbye ago
Interlude - The Grand Game ago
Interlude - Endless Headaches ago
Interlude - Waxing Crescent ago
234. Dawning ago
235. Ego ago
236. Visit ago
237. Fault ago
238. Malady ago
239. Miscommunication ago
240. Fear ago
241. Surprise ago
242. Classmates ago
243. Planning ago
244. Reevaluation ago
245. Origin ago
246. Party ago
247. Chat ago
248. Want ago
249. Exposed ago
250. Pride ago
251. Gossip ago
252. Image ago
253. Experiment ago
254. Divide ago
255. Science ago
256. Connections ago
257. Conflux ago
258. Hurry ago
259. Hunted ago
260. Twilight ago
261. Hide ago
262. Breaking Point ago
263. Stabilize ago
264. Talk ago
265. Detour ago
266. Road ago
267. Infiltration ago
268. Reconnaissance ago
269. Doctor ago
270. Examination ago
271. Treatment ago
272. Estrangement ago
273. Detente ago
274. Debriefing ago
275. Scramble ago
276. Avatar ago
277. Dilemma ago
278. Homunculus ago
279. Meili ago

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Soeir
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So, first off, Fates Parallel is very well written. Very few errors, fluid prose, and no inconcistencies as far as I was able to read.

But I can't continue reading it.

Not because of plot armor or something like that. The coincidences happening to Lee Jia can easily be explained by the story, so that's a non-issue.

Not because it follows cliches. It's actually quite ingenious in its use of the regular xianxia tropes and offer a slightly different, and enjoyable, take on the genre.

Not because of the yuri direction it seems to take. I'm fine with that.

But I have BIG trouble staying invested in the main character. For spoiler reasons.

Lee Jia is pitiful. I don't see any other way to put it.

She's not only pitiful, she's fun and bright and interesting to read about at the start, but her reaction to Yan Yue's betrayal is... impossible for me to read.

I understand that there's something wrong with her psyche, that the author made her too nice on purpose. But it's just not fun to read. The 3 last chapters have been a slog for me.

It is absolutely not the fault of the author, I understand what they want to write, and I'm guessing this "nice" phase won't last, but I just can't keep going when Lee Jia repeatedly feels empathy for someone that shows very clearly she's in it for herself and is willing, and has done already, major harm to her and An Eui.

God damn, she even felt sorry for the girl that caused An Eui's exile and lied about it to get into her pants !

I'm not about to tell the author what to do with their own story, but it's too much for me.

In a way, congratulations, author, you made me care for your story. It's just going in a direction I physically can't enjoy.

 

In the end, it's a personnal shortcomming that is stopping me from reading this fiction, but it is a good story nonetheless.

Read it and make your own opinion.

FlavorTown
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Great plot, but as a whole is a slog.

Reviewed at: 96. Introduction

(I know this is a mostly negative and harsh review, but when you told your readers In an author's note mid way through the story that that chapter had almost all negative comments on it and cause many people to drop you should REALLY consider a rewrite or rollback...)

I had great hopes for the story, it has great reviews and was even recommended by a friend.

Now don't get me wrong, the plot is good and very interesting, and the allied character's were all great (except Xin). it's why I've read up to chapter 94 after all! 

But the kicker is that our (main) MC Jia is such a forgiving, trusting and generous saint of stupidity that I considered dropping about 20-30 chapters in. Her personality is a MAJOR mismatch to her background, and it comes off quite rough and jarring at times. But like I said, I really toughed it out for the story and allied character's.

Speaking of other characters, let me explain. Firstly, the rivals/enemies are, with one exception, 100% the  usual insane, self centered, revenge hungry and completely delusional cultivation story enemies. And the one that wasn't (the singing girl to avoid spoilers) was real close and also cause me to put this down and barely come back latter. The friends on the other hand were enjoyable and with good humor, though some were diminished by their acquisition with how damn trusting and forgiving Jia is.

And to wrap it all up up, the author REAL likes to shit on our poor MCs. Like come on man give the poor girls a damn break. It just sad defeat and hollow victories.

DanceLikeAFool
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A Guilty Pleasure Serial

Reviewed at: 216. Pact

Guilty pleasure only in the sense that I seem to be winding down whenever I stop to read this. Pairs well with wine.

Style: The pace moves quickly when it needs to and slows down when working on interpersonal development and major plot points -- which is my personal preference. The characters are far from perfect, nor do they make all the right choices. How boring would that be?

 

Grammar: Excellent. No problem reading. Very smooth.


Story: Like a very long serialization that you keep reading. Checking in on it when there is downtime and enjoying it without any hint of urgency.

Characters: In some stories there are characters that absolutely surprise you with how they flip from one personality to another. This is not one of those stories. The consistency of these characters and their growth in general is welcome. There are a lot of relatable personalities and tropes that feel a little more niche than your average RR story, but they're very, very good.

If you're looking for a story to invest in that has characters that undergo long and thorough development with a bit of that Wuxia magic, this is the one.

Thanks for the story.

 

Jotun R
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Sone of the best xianxia i've read

Reviewed at: 118. Sisters

I started quite sceptical after reading the mixed reviews, but after getting to chapter 118 i have to say that most of the flak thrown at this webnobel is very misguided.

Fates Parallel is excelent, it has an ok start, but after the first arc, it starts to get steam and the writing improves a lot, the author has made an interesting universe of mixed power fantasy elements into a great whole that has a distinct far east aestethic, it has a lot of promise and potential, i'm glued to more updates.

Keep up the ancestors work DarkTechnomancer!

chay
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The story is good, 

The story following Jia and Eui is cool, it's well structured and while we can be confused on the mc, it's because the mc themselves are confused. We can follow how they grow and it's pretty fun. The systems of cultivations are pretty good, and their interaction is pretty fun.

Compared to other pure wuxia story this one is more low high level. The author takes its time to properly "level up" it's characters and is not blindly rushing to have an op mc. 

The interpersonal relationship are well done, there is friendshiph, envy, hate and a lot of other emotions. It's not just the classic friend vs enemy.

If you see comments or reviews talking about the cover it's because the first one was reaaaally bad, however as you can see right now the cover changed and is now pretty good. Thanks the author for taking our feedback, it's appreciated.

 

In spoilers the "old" review, which was essentially talking about the cover.

The story is good, the cover is pretty bad.

The story following Jia and Eui is cool, it's well structured and while we can be confused on the mc, it's because the mc themselves are confused. We can follow how they grow and it's pretty fun. The systems of cultivations are pretty good, and their interaction is pretty fun.

However the style of the image on the cover is creepy, I'm sorry to say this, but seeing this image really destroy the image of the mc i have. While reading the story i imagine those "cute" girls and then i remember the creepy eyes and fingers of the cover.

It ruins my imersion of the story, i can understand some creative freedom for the artist, but at least respect some basic human proportion. I know the girls are half spirit, but those look like some insect fae-guys with the proportion of the face all wrong, it's too alien for me.

I know it's a pretty long rant for just a cover but it's the first thing someone see of your story, and you want your main characters to be "human" so that the reader can empathise easily with them, this cover make this pretty difficult. Moreover if you want readers the cover is a pretty important selling point, and if another author did not advertise your story, i would probably not have read it (because of the cover).

 

Pennytail
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Really, really good.

Reviewed at: 214. Portent

I don't spend much of my free time reading, but when I do, it's the latest chapter of Fates Parallel, available to patrons and close personal friends of DarkTechnomancer.

I was lucky enough to see the conception of this story long before it reached online publication, and though my knowledge of the xianxia genre is limited only to this story thus far, it certainly leaves a favorable impression on me. The sense of steady progression both in terms of power and character, not only for Lee Jia and An Eui but also the supporting cast, continues to delight me even 200+ chapters in.

I was also the one who provided the poorly received cover art before it was replaced with what we have now. Despite the blow to my ego, I was proud of the work I had done, specifically because it was for this story that I adore.

I want to see Fates Parallel progress all the way to the end, whether it take another hundred chapters or even a thousand, and I hope DT does too. Keep it up, my guy.

PrometheusDarkflame
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Good book, go read it or something.

Reviewed at: 243. Planning

It's good, I'm tired, there's a minimum word count for a review, here we go.

I'll probably update the review to be more descriptive if I remember later, but for now I'll just say that the characters are good, not perfect, but well written, the world building is great, and the magic system is fun.

Thats the good stuff, the bad stuff... honestly, there's not much. Sometimes the pacing is a bit weird, but that's most just the fact this is a web serial, and everyone on this site should be used to that. Other than that, I've seen that some people are calling this a derivative or copy of Forge of Destiny, and... I guess I can see that? But honestly I don't think it matters much, and there's just as much chance that it's pure coincidence because the tropes and parts they share are really common. I don't know the author personally, and I'd much rather not assume their inspiration for this story, but I will say that if you liked Forge of Destiny, you'll like this, and I even prefer Fates Parallel myself. Anyway, I'm over the word count now, so stop reading reviews and read the story.

Serve
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A really great story, but just not for me.

Reviewed at: 80. Regrets

I've really enjoyed the author's writing and how they've overall pieced together the story.  The world that this story builds is fascinating and I really do enjoy the various factions and how they interact with each other.  And, the reason that I read up to this point, the author really has a way with words that keeps you invested and strikes a good balance between dialogue and narration while having a good sense of when to create action and when to let the pace slow.  And they write a great action scene as well when the pace picks up.

Unfortunately, I'm dropping this because i primarily get invested into a story for the characters and the continued actions of some of the main character's just have gradually turned me off this story.  Primarily, I just really don't enjoy reading about the main supporting character and the way she interacts with the other members of the cast. And the continued rash actions of the protagonist and general suddenness have also been small contributing factors as well.

Ultimately though, like I said earlier, I think this is a great story that deserves at least your consideration and that the author is really fantastic with their prose.  But it just became not for me.

SirWilhelm
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First arc was great. Second completely lost me and characters/story really started to lose it. I cant stand Jia anymore and how utterly trusting she is and how she just throws everything away to get to someone and in the end forgives them anyway. Utterly infuriating.

The xianxia/wuxia system is a very common one if you are familiar with the genre but it is don't pretty well, something was done well at least, even if it was all a bit normal and predictable 

Grammar is fine and the style is as well but the new people who were introduced in arc two are just some of the worst I've ever read. Wouldn't recommend anything past the first book. Maybe if things didn't go how they did in chapter 50 I would have kept reading on, but from the point her future is sealed and for an absurd reason. I am honestly a bit sad because I was invested in certain aspects of the story which I'll never be able to figure out, maybe I can ask someone who's suffered through the whole thing. I tried skipping forward a bit and skimming to see if any justice is done and I'm pretty sure it isn't. Some just don't deserve forgiveness. Goodbye and good riddance.

Culain
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Starts well and drops off significantly

Reviewed at: 51. Compromise

Starts really well with a lot of promise and then in the second book a series of improbable forced events occur, the characters take illogical actions that aren't consistent with their characters. Frankly the second book has more plot holes than a colander.

The characters are reasonably well written if inconsistent in their motivations. For example the MC spends her whole life as a theif not trusting anyone and the moment she gets into the college she starts trusting everyone implicitly?? The multidiscipline cultivation streams start well but again start to lose consistency and believeability as the series goes on. It's not any where near the level of Beware of Chicken and others.