The World of Ash

The World of Ash

by CATaylor

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The nesting ground of dragons.  In the settled realms of Firma there was only one such region, in the once small kingdom of Talon.  Under the attention of the Talonites, the highly avoided area developed into an incredible treasure.

Knowing the site had to be protected at all costs, the 1st Talon Emperor constructed an imposing fortification he called the Sky Ramparts.  Later simply known as the Sky-fort, the fortress dashed the hopes of every invading force for over a thousand years, and the rise of the Talon Empire was unimpeded.  For it was not simply the nesting site of dragons.  It was the source of Talon's greatest strength.  Dragonriders!

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