LORD SHADOW

Enjoyable at the start, degrades further and further later on.

Spoilers:

Story:
Book 1, useless ranking systems and useless power systems

Stage 1-10, 11-29, 30-39, 40-50-60.. 4~ stages, you explain stuff about them but he never fights any humans in those stages, there might aswell be just 1 stage.
The MC and friends skip levels too fast, and content is never used.
and if he does fight something, its monsters, which have their own ranking system.
This ranking system only matter in the beginning.

There are also alot off asspulls, even tho you say you wouldn't do that and made extensive skill lists. yet the very next chapter he does an asspull.

Story was best, till Loki arrived, after that everything about systems and powers gets trown away in favor off xiaxia asspulls and shitty name sense.
It then turned into "Godly Heaven Wind Tiger Fang POOP of the 4th universe ARSE"

Book 2, i dropped the story here, the earth 2 is just plain bad writing.

Grammar:
Horrible, Horrible, did i say that twice? ~pun
Laughing when you see the top reviews having 4+ star grammar scores....
and you realize most reviews are crap

Lord Shadow review

A Dok Recommendations!

Yet a story by Kiekokumars, Author to the beautifully written serie of Age of Heroes, as well as its predecessor; Age of Adventure!

We follow our protagonist, Azief, in his endevours in a World of Change. A place off dog eats dog, and only the strongest of penguins survive, and the most powerful, thrive!
We start of in the seconds before Ragnärok decends on the World, as we watch Azief struggle to live, being helped by the Author's livid use of words and cleverly stringed sentences!
It is like reading an artwork, the way the words capture you, entangle you in their stories and sweet promises...

Style
The style follows a new bloom of writing styles of the LitRPG genre, the 'world governed by RPG rules', also referred to by most ad 'the System'.
The Author is not heavily relying on 'The system', merely using it as a means to entangle us in a scenery where the common man is tossed in to a den of growling beasts where we get to watch how they will fare when handled a stick, some rope and a polised stone....

Story
The story is of the history kind!
Following then beginning of a Living Legend, with a fate greater than all of them can imagine! Even I, a reader cannot look so far Into the future!

There are some great PoV changes that makes the World more detailed as well as giving the story life as well as showing different perspectives to the same point of reference, making it all the more exciting, as one may see it as the obvious true, acting as if it is the natural order, while another character may see the shadows lurking in the lies Foretold, trying to build up evidente while staying wary of the possible desciever.
And no one knows who's right until the Author lets us know!

Grammar
I must be honest, and the Author himself know this and has been trying his hardest, the grammar can be severely lagging and sometimes quite ruthless.
But I beg you, fellow penguins, persevere. The story itself, the way of writing is too good to let [i]a bit of[/i] meagre grammar errors destroy your read.
I personally have learned to look away from the grammar, mistakes and enjoy the written style as well as the words handlinger by the Author himself, to give us the best experience we can get...
*cough* ahem...

Also, a PR of the story is being done, albeit slowly and may or may not be posted on the RRL page, that is up to the Author. Patience, my friends..

Character
The characters we meet are well described, showing to have purpose besides being the protagonists side-kick or arc nemesis... Or that one lad them seems to tick him off for no apparent reason. NONE OF THAT WE SHALL HAVE!
There are depth, and all characters have their own stories to tell.
This is a trait that goes to show again and again in all of his works, and a trait that I personally quite favour.

-Dok
Den's Monochromatic Viking

The story is awesome. Although the switch between different characters and the present and future can get annoying, it is done moderately and adds to the story. The characters are pretty consistent, but the MC is too OP which isn't bad but... Although it isn't my favorite, I like the author's style where he switches perspectives. However, he has horrible grammar. HE HAS NO SENSE OF PAST TENSE AND USES PRESENT TENSE WHERE HE ISN'T SUPPOSED TO.

 This is an awesome story. The author knows how to plan a story and it's elements and it shows in the way the story has been going on.

Keep up the good work. The grammar may not be the best but any reader will understand the story without any problems.

The novel has awesome story , great writing and other worldly mysteries and ideas.

I've read it till the latest chapter and never once have I gotten bored with it . Just when I think that I'm finally going to know the suspense , an even greater suspense pops out nowhere which thrills me to my core .

As for the pace of the story , although a bit slow it is fun to read . The MC is not like some useless hero who saves everyone he meets and mourns everyone that died which is good. The heroine is a bit irritating but nevertheless she just adds to the fun of the story.

The idea is the most innovative one that I have ever come across and it is revealed in a good way to the readers . ( Just need to work on the size of author notes a bit)

The grammar although not great , but is still good and doesn't hinder the fun and thrill of the story even one bit .

Anyways , keep the chapters incoming .

^_^ 

PS- I think this is the best novel I have read from the tens of novels I've come across

Good detailed plot, i like how you include all segments of the world rather than just Malaysia itself.

Keep up the good work

Well what can I say. The plot and the ideas are excellent, and the style of the writing is amazing as well. Theres ones thing I have to say about this story thou and that is the GRAMMAR. Its horrific. My eyes burn just thinking about it. What abomination came through and wrecked on your keyboard?!? This story could easily make it into top ten if only it had some better grammar. But NOOO, the author won’t get a bloody Proof Reader. Hes a horrible person I tell you, hes trying to kill your eyes. So unless you have somehow managed to download autocorrect into your mind, this story is gonna be sorta hard to read. May the god of glasses be with you.

Edit: Ok while the grammar is murder, at least its readable, and the author does try to do a good job about the grammar. Just read the bloody story. And Im pretty sure he wants a proofreader, its just that no one wants to proofread.

I think this novel is extremely good with superb idea and thrilling suspenses . Although it does have its drawbacks ( which Im pretty sure every novel has ) like the grammar but they do not hinder the overall fun of the story . The is typically a badass which I like and the post apocalyptic setting is fun too . Overall this story has the potential to reach the top ten too .

PS : WE WANT FASTER RELEASES !!!!!!!!!

I really love this site and how anytime I run out of translations or fictions to catch up on I can randomly browse and after 2 years still end up stumbling on some great works.  Please please please keep on writing good sir you have great talent for it.  I like the fact that you haven't overwhelmed us with the game elements.  Obviously they are there with skills and stats but the xianxia like development of pillars was a good idea...all in all...I really like it

P.s.  seriously moochers (the hundreds of viewers who read this) you need to make some reviews .  At the very least give a rating but seriously take the time and just put a few lines of encouragement down for the author.  I'm sure it helps

I'm from pahang malaysia... it's a good story.. please continue writing more