Where All Dreams Go

Where All Dreams Go

by Wata-Wata

A 2nd year high school student named, Justin Delmonte, grew to dislike his mundane life - he seeks adventure. He meets Halley, a rather peculiar and determined boy, who longs to go where his father has gone. Could this be the adventure that Justin Delmonte is searching for?

A highschool drama story that focuses on four friends on their journey that is thought to be impossible for highschoolers to do.

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TheGremlin
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I really like the pacing and the characters actually feel alive. The way you describe the environment and what the characters see is very vivid so much so that I can even see them myself. Some words get repeated quite a lot though, but that isn't really a big issue. Overall, I think it has potential. I'll keep reading. Seems like this is worth my time.