No Effort Power Fantasy

No Effort Power Fantasy

by Deviant4733

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The world has ended.

Everyone on earth is dead.

Except for one boy named ‘Heaven’. 

A terrible name his parents gave him since he was born.

Only Heaven had survived the apocalypse. He now has newfound godly powers that will let him do whatever he wants on this hell torn earth.

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crazy cupcake wizard
Overall

Not correcting in any of its glaring flaws, while being pretty self aware (I think). Clearly a casual creation from the author, which is fine. Pass from me. It does say 'no effort power fantasy', I suppose.

(If it gets better later, or if you want more detail in my review, feel free to DM me.)

zimakovs
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Correct title for the novel

Reviewed at: Ch 6 Adventure

While the idea is interesting, of turning in to a GOD for beign the last surviving human and also ironic, given the protagonists backstory, I find it very low effort, with no idea of how a human develops with years passing.

Turning into a GOD and having obsession of PS5 to the point of it being the main plot drive is weird.