The Day the Tea was Cold: A Dark Humor Robot Flash Fiction

by Kaylie Night

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LittleCreepy
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The characters are beautifully crafted. The dialogue is believable. The motivations are clear. Even the grammar is very good.

Read this. You won´t regret it.

This story is about a robot that is fed up with being treated as a second-class citizen. Its owner doesn’t believe it intelligent but demands an explanation for its recent most passive aggressive behavior.