Reborn! A Thief's Greed in a Fantasy World
Due to a few mistakes and stepping on a few too many toes, Keith Manowar, a career thief, and self-proclaimed "heist artist" is given a choice. die for good or be reborn in another world! However, he asks for one specific thing in this new world, magic.
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Pretty good so far. The Grammer dips in quality sometimes but nothing so bad that it'll mess up the story.
The MC is likable enough and following along with his thought process makes for a fun read.
The side characters aren't very developed but the don't need to be right now. The author gives just enough personality to them to make the story work.
The background is also fun to read. I'm glad the author gives just enough info to the background without it feeling like you're being suffocated by info dumps.
But speaking of info dumps the magic system is all info dumps. It gets a bit too much at times and I found myself skipping a few paragraphs of explanations.
Overall good read. The only major downside I can think of is the super short chapters. Magic experiment info dumps + short capers = not enough time for the plot to move forward. Also if your like me and skipped a few paragraphs then the chapters become even shorter.
So. Good story so far but I'll have to see what the release schedule is like.