Watching Grass Grow
Author: This will be my first fiction so I hope you cut me some slack that said I'm open to constructive criticism. Because of circumstance the release times might be far apart but i plan on finishing this thing even if support is nonexistent. My inspiration came from Re: Monster, Verdant Lord, Plants vs Zombies and Little Shop of Horrors. Warning: Mature rating is mainly for violence and foul language but others things might also come later.
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Re: Monster, plant edition. Comes with slave nymphs. Very enjoyable evolution story. No bullshit absorbsion powers. The first part with the gods was a little overdone. I would have rather it went quicker. But overall good!
the story concept is new. you should write more of this story
Unique and fun hehe...thanks for writing this story
if only had blue boxes . WHY? cause i am a BLUE BOX FAN and it would look cooler
And PLEASE UPDATE FASTER
I WANT MORE :PPPPP
As a fellow plant-reincarnation novel writer i support this fiction as it has good foundation and story!
The more that I read this story the more I enjoy it. The one real detraction in this story is how it is often not clear what is being done by who and why. Of note, the one time I mentioned it I quickly got a response from the author explaining the event.
I did also only give 4 stars for grammar. This is not because of bad spelling or usage, but it is because of the author putting in the wrong word/tense/usage/spelling/ect... quite infrequently. This means that the author is doing a really good job with making the story readable with good language skills, but makes a few mistakes here and there, that could easily be dealt with by a bit of additional proofreading.
In reality my only real complaint with the story is how slow the releases are in comparison to some of the other major fictions on the site. This is not a goad to make the author write faster at the expense of the quality of the work, but just a side comment.
Keep it up man.. You have a nice story..
interesting topic love to see more
In my opinion, I think the story is amusing to read, kinka funny at times ya know. It's a really fun story to read, there isn't a whole lot bad to say about it. I hope the story continues to be updated so that other readers and myself have the chance to read it.
Keep writing!! this story is awesome haha