Indebted: A Human/Robot Romance
by Kaylie Night
If I could give you one piece of advice, it would be this: never become indebted to a mortal.
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This felt very deep and personal and made me tear up. A story about a gal and a mata- automata? who fall in love. I don't have the brainjuice to write a nuanced review right now, but thank you very much for writing it Kaylie, and I hope whoever reads this review reads the story as well.
The story has a very concise but still smooth not abrupt way of saying things.
The writing is good; in that i mean it doesn't feel off, but I'm not exactly sure on grammar.
The major characters all feel like they have a personality, and the emotional journey was paired really well with the plot which is also original I feel.
All together, it's a very polished story.