Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain

by Ex-Soldier Lv 99

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After losing his parents in a car accident, Ryan immediately caught his fiancee cheating on him with his best friend. In just a few days, he lost everything he loved, so Ryan decided to buy a house in the mountains to process all those events. However, something happened before he could even enter his new home: the end of the world.

Monsters began to appear out of nowhere, and dragons began to dominate the skies. After losing everything, Ryan, who had lost his sense of reality, found new goals with the world in that state: survive and get stronger. Dungeons, classes, monsters, skills, the chance to obtain the DNA of other monsters... Ryan was decided to use them all because he no longer would become a spectator in his own life. Maybe with power, he won't lose anything anymore.

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Jacksonion Democracy
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So far the story is a typical LitRPG with a dude whose life has gone to hell and he ran away to the mountains when the system/apocaplyse arrives and everything goes even more tit's up. The characters so far have been pretty straight forward (good guy cop, ungrateful civilians, etc) and there is no complex plots that we have seen. The system itself is actually quite interesting as there are a couple abornmal aspects that you don't see in the typical system (skills are quite easy to get and not limited to classes, each skill level up gives a stat point, etc) however they aren't revolutionary ideas. The grammar is a bit weird, as it's never really "incorrect" but there are a lot of weird word choices and questionable sentence structures that make me think either the Author is a new writer or that English is not their first language. It's not a huge deal and doesn't really break immersion for the most part, but it's noticeable and makes the story less smooth to read.

Overall, this is a decent story (so far) and doesn't particularly shine or suck in any part - suffice to say if you like LitRPG's with a focus on Loner/Rogue MC's and you aren't mega picky about grammar you will enjoy reading this story. 

Varkt
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This novel is pretty good.  It has some grammer issues here and there, but it is still good.  The characters are decent and not one dymentional.  The story is progressing well.  There is a lot of action which is nice too.  I cant wait for more!  Please keep writing author!  I'm really enjoying it!

EldestDaoistBruh
Overall

Good but nothing to write home about as well. Mediocre characters without any depth, medium quality fighting scenes and weird dialogues. Nothing new and nothing exciting. System that provides skills for nothing and no explanation about the way exp works. Hope this helps the author improve and doesn't discourage because this is still better than most stories in this site. There are a lot of things to improve, there is little to no style(almost like a it is machine translated) no explanations about the system and dialogues are just bad. English is probably the authors second language and you can feel it while reading. I wrote so much because it needs 200 words but it apparently still isn't enough and I am having second thoughts about this review but I loath to just delete this god damn comment. 

HeartPiercingSpear
Overall

It's a good story, this is the second story of the author and I have read the first story as it was being released, one of my daily fixes, if I say so, anyway, I have seen the story evolve and with it characters, people change, world change and as it changes we can actually see it happen, with characters having their own back story instead of being just mc sidekicks. 

All in all a good story for regular consumption, and with stable updates and some planned changes enjoy the apocalypse story